scream into the tempest
a poem of Faith.11 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Excellent poem fill with colors and life: "around-pound/dies-rise/rain-again" I really liked this part :"Crouching in a pool of tears
as life storms whip around,
wicked winds of bitterness
and doubt, pummel and pound"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Excellent poem fill with colors and life: "around-pound/dies-rise/rain-again" I really liked this part :"Crouching in a pool of tears
as life storms whip around,
wicked winds of bitterness
and doubt, pummel and pound"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the insightful review Iza. I do believe having a positive mantra to get us through life's storms does help.. until the sun comes out again. I can hear my mom's voice telling me that everything will be okay, it works for me, cheers.