The Singing Cloak
Waiting on true love...12 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is so romantic, Diana. You have a lovely style. To me, this is how free style should be. It's full of literary devices that evidence the expertise of your craft. I don't know which I like better--the stanza about the "colorful fabric" or the stanza about the "singing cloak." Perhaps the singing cloak. That is just so poetic. I could rave on.
Excellent job.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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This is so romantic, Diana. You have a lovely style. To me, this is how free style should be. It's full of literary devices that evidence the expertise of your craft. I don't know which I like better--the stanza about the "colorful fabric" or the stanza about the "singing cloak." Perhaps the singing cloak. That is just so poetic. I could rave on.
Excellent job.
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Awww! Thank you so much! This was a draft that I?d forgotten all about and found it going through some old stuff! Even though the contest doesn?t end until December, it gave me some to tweak this weekend after the joy of finding it again! Your comment is greatly appreciated!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is exquisite, Diana. You have created a beautiful metaphor here with each of your stanzas. I especially love the expression 'dawn-soft morn.' I read this several times --always out loud-- because it brought me joy and tranquility. Good luck with the contest!! xo
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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This is exquisite, Diana. You have created a beautiful metaphor here with each of your stanzas. I especially love the expression 'dawn-soft morn.' I read this several times --always out loud-- because it brought me joy and tranquility. Good luck with the contest!! xo
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! I could not be happier right now! Your precious comment thrills me to no end! Thank you immensely!