Chip's Poetry
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102 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
this is a profound piece of poetry dear chip! the philosophical sentiment is lovely and the poem itself insightful.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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this is a profound piece of poetry dear chip! the philosophical sentiment is lovely and the poem itself insightful.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much, Rebekka!
Comment from closetpoetjester
Well so long as it's the fear you are stomping on and not that ledge as I have a feeling it would not hold and then holy moly that fear would be rising pretty quick LOL
Loved the message here. Face your fears head on and celebrate with the victory dance. Sounds great in theory!
Well done and good luck!
Cheers P
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Well so long as it's the fear you are stomping on and not that ledge as I have a feeling it would not hold and then holy moly that fear would be rising pretty quick LOL
Loved the message here. Face your fears head on and celebrate with the victory dance. Sounds great in theory!
Well done and good luck!
Cheers P
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Poetic Friend
The title alone sold me. I love the title because it is innovative. The contents of the poem did not disappoint either. You provided the reader with inspirational words in which we all should abide.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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The title alone sold me. I love the title because it is innovative. The contents of the poem did not disappoint either. You provided the reader with inspirational words in which we all should abide.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you, PF!
Comment from ShyWri
I'm so impressed that you didn't waste a single syllable on an unnecessary word. The photo and words of this brief piece are very inspiring--especially to those of us who struggle with self-confidence.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I'm so impressed that you didn't waste a single syllable on an unnecessary word. The photo and words of this brief piece are very inspiring--especially to those of us who struggle with self-confidence.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thanks!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I do wish I had six stars for this one. This would make a great poster.
Exceptional rhyme; exceptional message ... one that motivates and inspires me personally at this new season of my life.
I love the last line!!
This is an exceptional contest entry!!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I do wish I had six stars for this one. This would make a great poster.
Exceptional rhyme; exceptional message ... one that motivates and inspires me personally at this new season of my life.
I love the last line!!
This is an exceptional contest entry!!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Sophia Delgado
I've seen so many incredible entries to this contest. They never fail to blow me away. Fear is so hard to face but we need to take your advice; not everything will be in our comfort zone, so we have to step out someday. We might as well do it with gusto.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I've seen so many incredible entries to this contest. They never fail to blow me away. Fear is so hard to face but we need to take your advice; not everything will be in our comfort zone, so we have to step out someday. We might as well do it with gusto.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Sophia!
Comment from TLSeaman
Such a strong message in so few words. As someone who often has trouble venturing out of my comfort zone, these are wise words to contemplate. Your rhyme flows smoothly without seeming forced. I really like the thought of a triumphant victory dance once fear has been conquered. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Such a strong message in so few words. As someone who often has trouble venturing out of my comfort zone, these are wise words to contemplate. Your rhyme flows smoothly without seeming forced. I really like the thought of a triumphant victory dance once fear has been conquered. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you, TL!
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Short but sweet. Quiet but very powerful and highly motivational. Definitely five stars. Says a great deal in only a few well chosen words. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Short but sweet. Quiet but very powerful and highly motivational. Definitely five stars. Says a great deal in only a few well chosen words. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Jerome!
Comment from Habib Oke
Well written! Simple and concise with a complete thought. It's a motivational writing. It says that one should not be conplacent of the little comfort you find. Be usatiable and go beyond the boundary in search for more comfort. Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Well written! Simple and concise with a complete thought. It's a motivational writing. It says that one should not be conplacent of the little comfort you find. Be usatiable and go beyond the boundary in search for more comfort. Great job!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Habib!
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect mach
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
And I can relate to your every word.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect mach
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
And I can relate to your every word.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Cookie!
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Your very welcome, have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
