Chip's Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Beyond The Words"FanStory Collection
46 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
I'm glad to see you won the contest. I did vote for this entry, as the words are very meaningful. Great sentiments captured in a few short lines. Congratulations! I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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I'm glad to see you won the contest. I did vote for this entry, as the words are very meaningful. Great sentiments captured in a few short lines. Congratulations! I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, June!
Comment from BeasPeas
Congratulations on winning the contest. Well composed and illustrated. Writing is a rewarding experience as poetry allows each reader to bring his/her own interpretation to it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Congratulations on winning the contest. Well composed and illustrated. Writing is a rewarding experience as poetry allows each reader to bring his/her own interpretation to it. Marilyn
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Marilyn!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an interesting way to describe poetry, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your words make strong statement. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This is an interesting way to describe poetry, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your words make strong statement. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Jan!
Comment from Coco Jane
I like this!
It's hard to say a lot in so few syllables, but you've done admirably.
I like the idea of seeing beyond the words. That is the very definition of poetry!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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I like this!
It's hard to say a lot in so few syllables, but you've done admirably.
I like the idea of seeing beyond the words. That is the very definition of poetry!
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the kind words and generous rating, Jane!
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really enjoy your entry for the prompt.
It's lovely and I'm sure it resonates with most readers.
Original imagery :)
Wishing you the best of luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Hello :)
I really enjoy your entry for the prompt.
It's lovely and I'm sure it resonates with most readers.
Original imagery :)
Wishing you the best of luck in the voting booth.
Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you, Debra!
Comment from Heather Knight
What a beautiful and clever way to describe a poem! The picture is perfect to illustrate your point.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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What a beautiful and clever way to describe a poem! The picture is perfect to illustrate your point.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you, Maria!
Comment from sharonlshelley
A very lovely 15 syllables poem flows really well short but straight to the point, the picture also works well with words, good luck for the poetry competition.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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A very lovely 15 syllables poem flows really well short but straight to the point, the picture also works well with words, good luck for the poetry competition.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Many thanks, Sharon!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yes, Anonymous Poet, they are indeed.
Poetry is an echo asking a shadow to dance.
It is language at its most distilled and most powerful.
Edgar Allan Poe once wrote: "If a poem hasn't ripped apart your soul you haven't experienced poetry."
Nice writing.
I wish you the best of luck in the prompt's outcome.
~Dean
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Yes, Anonymous Poet, they are indeed.
Poetry is an echo asking a shadow to dance.
It is language at its most distilled and most powerful.
Edgar Allan Poe once wrote: "If a poem hasn't ripped apart your soul you haven't experienced poetry."
Nice writing.
I wish you the best of luck in the prompt's outcome.
~Dean
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you, Dean!
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You're welcome; the pleasure was all mine.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Excellent thoughts are conveyed in your well-crafted 5/7/5 poetic offering. The image of a "wondrous prism" is beautiful as we search to "see beyond the words" and search for meaning.
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Excellent thoughts are conveyed in your well-crafted 5/7/5 poetic offering. The image of a "wondrous prism" is beautiful as we search to "see beyond the words" and search for meaning.
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks, Diane.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
I loved the words in your poem. I've read all the entries and yours is one of my top two. I think you've got a great chance at taking the whole thing. Much good luck to you!
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
I loved the words in your poem. I've read all the entries and yours is one of my top two. I think you've got a great chance at taking the whole thing. Much good luck to you!
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks, Robyn!