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Comment from ciliverde
I love that all your stories feature dogs as major characters. I'm jumping in on Chapter six so I have some catching up to do, but I find the characters engaging - especially McKenzie. I do like reading about female cops or PIs! Well done,
Carol
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I love that all your stories feature dogs as major characters. I'm jumping in on Chapter six so I have some catching up to do, but I find the characters engaging - especially McKenzie. I do like reading about female cops or PIs! Well done,
Carol
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. I happen to be a huge dog lover. LOL
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHA. Awwwwww... Logan is talking to the dogs. :))
I don't doubt it's necessary either, Logan. ALWAYS better to be safe than sorry, and your creator/author (lol) has built so much suspense, I'd be disappointed if you were less than ultra-careful.
WONDERFUL Barbara! SUPER chapter!
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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HAHAHA. Awwwwww... Logan is talking to the dogs. :))
I don't doubt it's necessary either, Logan. ALWAYS better to be safe than sorry, and your creator/author (lol) has built so much suspense, I'd be disappointed if you were less than ultra-careful.
WONDERFUL Barbara! SUPER chapter!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. I think Logan is right on target.
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You're most welcome!
Comment from Tootie
I have missed the earlier chapters, but enjoyed this one anyway. The pace and flow was good. Dialogue was believable and well-written. Saw no errors. Appreciated the list of characters and notes. Well done!
Blessings, Cathy
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I have missed the earlier chapters, but enjoyed this one anyway. The pace and flow was good. Dialogue was believable and well-written. Saw no errors. Appreciated the list of characters and notes. Well done!
Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. I hope you drop by more often.
Comment from judiverse
Great work! Logan really is protective of Mac. At the gym, though, she showed she didn't need much protection. The problem is when you don't know when or where an attack might be coming, and you could be thrown off guard. Logan is so right about the package. It definitely needs to be checked out. It seems like Mac doesn't want to admit there is a serious threat against her, but Logan she could be in great danger. judi
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Great work! Logan really is protective of Mac. At the gym, though, she showed she didn't need much protection. The problem is when you don't know when or where an attack might be coming, and you could be thrown off guard. Logan is so right about the package. It definitely needs to be checked out. It seems like Mac doesn't want to admit there is a serious threat against her, but Logan she could be in great danger. judi
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I think we will find out she's in real danger. I wonder if Logan will be around to protect her. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to your story. I'm enjoying it very much. I'm very sorry that it's been a bad year for you so far. i wish you would share this with us. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Hi Barbara, this is a great continuation to your story. I'm enjoying it very much. I'm very sorry that it's been a bad year for you so far. i wish you would share this with us. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from susand3022
A dachshund in a backpack! That's something I've never seen before up this way! Up here, in my neck of the woods, if a dog isn't going to walk, or run, with you... it's staying at home! LOL, I've never seen Paris Hilton or a dog in a purse up here. ;)
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reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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A dachshund in a backpack! That's something I've never seen before up this way! Up here, in my neck of the woods, if a dog isn't going to walk, or run, with you... it's staying at home! LOL, I've never seen Paris Hilton or a dog in a purse up here. ;)
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Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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LOL I've never seen it either, but I figured why not? LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Logan turns up at Mckenzie's early at 6:15am just as.she was arising, and wants to take the dogs for a walk. He has a special device for Arlo. They both go to the Gym, and Logan proves proficient at something Mckenzie is good at. They find a suspicious looking avpckage when they get back, Logan call 911. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : They're very good conversationalist(s).
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reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Logan turns up at Mckenzie's early at 6:15am just as.she was arising, and wants to take the dogs for a walk. He has a special device for Arlo. They both go to the Gym, and Logan proves proficient at something Mckenzie is good at. They find a suspicious looking avpckage when they get back, Logan call 911. Well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : They're very good conversationalist(s).
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Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I'll make that correction. Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome Barbara,
