Forever Young
Poem of Seven Words or Less12 total reviews
Comment from Henry King
This is a message which projects the writer's vision clearly. I think it is an excellent entry in the Seven Words or Less contest. With the D'Harmental's picture, this artist's words make the message more dear in my mind. Not being able to see the tail, I can't tell whether it is a lamb or a kid. Well done.
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reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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This is a message which projects the writer's vision clearly. I think it is an excellent entry in the Seven Words or Less contest. With the D'Harmental's picture, this artist's words make the message more dear in my mind. Not being able to see the tail, I can't tell whether it is a lamb or a kid. Well done.
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Comment from Raul1
This poem is like being Peter Pan all over again and staying young forever. We are afraid of getting old, but it's a part of life. We all have to accept it. Interesting poem. Well done!
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reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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This poem is like being Peter Pan all over again and staying young forever. We are afraid of getting old, but it's a part of life. We all have to accept it. Interesting poem. Well done!
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Comment Written 23-May-2019
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You're welcome!