World
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very sad and fearful offering for the contest this evening -- you've masterfully met this restrictive format! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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A very sad and fearful offering for the contest this evening -- you've masterfully met this restrictive format! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-6, World, has the right set up and comments on the state of the world today. Much like the iron curtain years, we wait for the worst to happen.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This 2-4-6, World, has the right set up and comments on the state of the world today. Much like the iron curtain years, we wait for the worst to happen.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sugarray77
Good job on this short but poignant verse. You did a good job in creating a heartfelt message in a short poem. I enjoyed reading it and wish you luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Good job on this short but poignant verse. You did a good job in creating a heartfelt message in a short poem. I enjoyed reading it and wish you luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from TPAC
Bangs up Revelation, the great unveiling, in my opinion about this particular write, warning event sequence projecting a future? All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Bangs up Revelation, the great unveiling, in my opinion about this particular write, warning event sequence projecting a future? All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from victor 66
This a good example of a two - four - six poem entry that rhymes as well. I think you've covered all the bases of the prompt and I wish you well in the contest. Take care.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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This a good example of a two - four - six poem entry that rhymes as well. I think you've covered all the bases of the prompt and I wish you well in the contest. Take care.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are most welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, an excellent entry in this 2/4/6 poetry contest. It would seem that there is an awful lot to fear in this world, the way things are going, terrorism, climate change, debt, no wonder peopl worry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Oh yes, an excellent entry in this 2/4/6 poetry contest. It would seem that there is an awful lot to fear in this world, the way things are going, terrorism, climate change, debt, no wonder peopl worry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork, and I
agree with your note.
-The syllable count and
rhyme are good.
-I like your timely topic
with a good message.
-The image of tears
is effective in describing
the state of the world.
-The last line gives the
impact of "world fears."
-A good entry; good luck.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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-Nice artwork, and I
agree with your note.
-The syllable count and
rhyme are good.
-I like your timely topic
with a good message.
-The image of tears
is effective in describing
the state of the world.
-The last line gives the
impact of "world fears."
-A good entry; good luck.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are quite welcome.