Chip's Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Beach Time"FanStory Collection
25 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A beautiful picture that fits so well with your poem. Arouses memories of our many vacations with our children in the warmth of the Florida sun and sand. Very fitting; well done.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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A beautiful picture that fits so well with your poem. Arouses memories of our many vacations with our children in the warmth of the Florida sun and sand. Very fitting; well done.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thanks, Raffaelina.
Comment from Gail Denham
And I'm happy for you and with you. We used to take big bunches of the family to coast - now they're all so busy , they don't have time to join us there. But the memories are still vivid. Son surf skimming, kids building sand castles, leaping the waves.
Ahhh - this is memory-building time.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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And I'm happy for you and with you. We used to take big bunches of the family to coast - now they're all so busy , they don't have time to join us there. But the memories are still vivid. Son surf skimming, kids building sand castles, leaping the waves.
Ahhh - this is memory-building time.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Great stuff...thanks, Gail!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an obviously fun and personally enjoyable write, even in rhyme and rhythm and fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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In my opinion, an obviously fun and personally enjoyable write, even in rhyme and rhythm and fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you, Eve!
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You are very welcome indeed...Eve
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These few words bring warmth, they are unselfish and giving and your presentation is pleasing and I wish you luck with the contest . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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These few words bring warmth, they are unselfish and giving and your presentation is pleasing and I wish you luck with the contest . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thanks, Dolly!
Comment from victor 66
A very touching two - four - six syllable poem that rhymes as well. I think you've covered all the bases without your words being forced. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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A very touching two - four - six syllable poem that rhymes as well. I think you've covered all the bases without your words being forced. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you, Victor.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome, mystery writer.
Comment from misscookie
What a LOVELY PICTURE A FATHER ENJOYING THE SUNNY BEACH WITH HIS DAUGHTER
I LOVE THE ARTWORK THAT YOU CHOOSE TO GO WITH YOUR WRITE IT S A PERFECT MATCH
COOKIE
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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What a LOVELY PICTURE A FATHER ENJOYING THE SUNNY BEACH WITH HIS DAUGHTER
I LOVE THE ARTWORK THAT YOU CHOOSE TO GO WITH YOUR WRITE IT S A PERFECT MATCH
COOKIE
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thank you, Cookie!
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Your welcomer
Take care
cookie
Comment from LisaMay
What a delightful picture and perky verse! I remember my Dad swinging me like that (until I got too big and pulled his arm sockets out, haha, but we both enjoyed it). Your poem is nice for me to see on this chilly autumn day as we slip into winter down here in NZ.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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What a delightful picture and perky verse! I remember my Dad swinging me like that (until I got too big and pulled his arm sockets out, haha, but we both enjoyed it). Your poem is nice for me to see on this chilly autumn day as we slip into winter down here in NZ.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Glad to send you some virtual warmth, LisaMay. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count and
rhyme are good.
-A good poem for the
contest as you share
a special time with
your daughter.
-A joyful time for all!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count and
rhyme are good.
-A good poem for the
contest as you share
a special time with
your daughter.
-A joyful time for all!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, Pam!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-6 poem about a daughter who loves the ocean and there is no reason why we cannot take her there to enjoy the sunshine and the beach.
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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A very well-written 2-4-6 poem about a daughter who loves the ocean and there is no reason why we cannot take her there to enjoy the sunshine and the beach.
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, Sandra!
Comment from Hitcher
I loved your choice of photo, it gave me flashbacks to to my days at the beach with my girls when they were young enough for me to swing around and the joy they got from it. I think you have offered up a cool little poem for the contest and one which many will enjoy, good luck!
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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I loved your choice of photo, it gave me flashbacks to to my days at the beach with my girls when they were young enough for me to swing around and the joy they got from it. I think you have offered up a cool little poem for the contest and one which many will enjoy, good luck!
Comment Written 22-May-2019
reply by the author on 22-May-2019
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Thanks, Hitcher!