Chip's Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Breathe Into It"FanStory Collection
30 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a sterling presentation in this well framed write - succinct and defining in both smoothly articulated verse and striking image - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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In my opinion, a sterling presentation in this well framed write - succinct and defining in both smoothly articulated verse and striking image - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks, Eve.
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You're very welcome...Eve
Comment from Rmocruz
This brief verse is free-flowing and poetic in 5-7-5 format.
The photo-art selection is well complementing.
I see a promising writing prompt contest entry.
Best wishes!
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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This brief verse is free-flowing and poetic in 5-7-5 format.
The photo-art selection is well complementing.
I see a promising writing prompt contest entry.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from misscookie
Wow
This is a great write
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match Seeing the mist from the horses mouth told it all.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last thank you for sharrng
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Wow
This is a great write
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match Seeing the mist from the horses mouth told it all.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last thank you for sharrng
Cookie
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks for the kind words and generous rating, Cookie!
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your very welcome
cookie
Comment from Tina Crute
This poem is unique in that the words are simple, but state a profound fact. If you are breathing, you are living, and that's something to be thankful for. The word crisp makes me think of feeding an apple to the horse:) It seems you may have found the picture first, as it is so perfectly paired with your words. Either way, this is a winner , in my humble opinion, because of the total beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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This poem is unique in that the words are simple, but state a profound fact. If you are breathing, you are living, and that's something to be thankful for. The word crisp makes me think of feeding an apple to the horse:) It seems you may have found the picture first, as it is so perfectly paired with your words. Either way, this is a winner , in my humble opinion, because of the total beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you, Tina!
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You are so welcome!
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I really wanted to give you a six,
but I am out of them:( Just consider
your poem exceptional:)
Comment from Heather Knight
It is indeed an affirmation of life.
I like your original little poem and the gorgeous picture you chose to accompany it.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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It is indeed an affirmation of life.
I like your original little poem and the gorgeous picture you chose to accompany it.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you, Maria!
Comment from Hitcher
I think you have nailed the contest brief, with or without the accompanying artwork( which I thought jelled perfectly with your words). Good luck in the booth, I reckon you have a contender here : ))
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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I think you have nailed the contest brief, with or without the accompanying artwork( which I thought jelled perfectly with your words). Good luck in the booth, I reckon you have a contender here : ))
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thanks, Hitcher!
Comment from LisaMay
What a lovely presentation - gorgeous photo of the horse-breath vapor, and the words themselves catch the idea of life going on through wintry times.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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What a lovely presentation - gorgeous photo of the horse-breath vapor, and the words themselves catch the idea of life going on through wintry times.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you, LisaMay!
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading this 5-7-5 Your lines create a pleasing
scene in the reader's mind,even without the picture.
the picture is beautiful though.
I love a crisp winter day and seeing our breath is a definite
affirmation of life.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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I enjoyed reading this 5-7-5 Your lines create a pleasing
scene in the reader's mind,even without the picture.
the picture is beautiful though.
I love a crisp winter day and seeing our breath is a definite
affirmation of life.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you, Nancy!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent five seven five entry. So many of these I don,t understand. This
entry is very clear. Should do well in the contest. I don't respond if I
can't understand the entry, This is a good job.
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Excellent five seven five entry. So many of these I don,t understand. This
entry is very clear. Should do well in the contest. I don't respond if I
can't understand the entry, This is a good job.
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 21-May-2019
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Thank you, Willie! And I share your approach- if I don't understand a poem or story, I don't offer a sub-par review (as some do), rather I move along.
Comment from karenina
FIRST--I had a shock as I just completed a 75 word flash fiction on winter and thought "OH %$#!--I messed up!" (LOL)... Then, when my pulse came down under eighty I was able to appreciate the charm and serenity that is such a challenge to capture in 17 syllables!--Karenina
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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FIRST--I had a shock as I just completed a 75 word flash fiction on winter and thought "OH %$#!--I messed up!" (LOL)... Then, when my pulse came down under eighty I was able to appreciate the charm and serenity that is such a challenge to capture in 17 syllables!--Karenina
Comment Written 20-May-2019
reply by the author on 20-May-2019
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I'll share my similar gasp moment after the contest, Karenina. Thanks for the read/review and the chuckle!
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OH! Well thank goodness I'm not the ONLY one!--Karenina
