Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Missing You - Chapter 2"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from susand3022
Hi Tootie, This is just the loveliest thing... letters between two people in love. I think we have some of these put away in our family somewhere. I just love, love letters... don't you? The ones we have, talk mostly of family and friends and news from home... things you would say to keep a man's mind off the things around him. A very sweet write. :)
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Hi Tootie, This is just the loveliest thing... letters between two people in love. I think we have some of these put away in our family somewhere. I just love, love letters... don't you? The ones we have, talk mostly of family and friends and news from home... things you would say to keep a man's mind off the things around him. A very sweet write. :)
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Hi Susan, Both of us really appreciated your kind comments here. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance. Yes, letters are special! What you are sharing is what we want readers to feel when they are reading this novel in the making. We are thrilled to be writing it and so happy you enjoyed it. Chapter 3 is currently in the works and coming soon!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from victor 66
I would never argue with a romance. Your story and your poems are in depth, to the point and feel most sincere. I wish you good luck in your writing.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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I would never argue with a romance. Your story and your poems are in depth, to the point and feel most sincere. I wish you good luck in your writing.
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thanks so much for stopping by to read and review Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance. Thank you also for the good luck. Your comments are great are we're glad you felt the sincerity in the words. Stay tuned - next chapter coming soon!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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Bill and Cathy, thank you for your most in-depth reply. You are most welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is another very beautiful chapter you two have written. It is full of loving words and precious poems by you two. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Can't wait to read some more. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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This is another very beautiful chapter you two have written. It is full of loving words and precious poems by you two. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Can't wait to read some more. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Hi Teri!
We are so glad you enjoyed Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Thank you also for following along. We're already working on Chapter 3 so stay tuned.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
When you co-author how do you divide the points and funds? Just wondering about that. This is a sweet love letter, well two love letters and two poems, telling of the love separated lovers feel for each other. Well done. I saw no errors. Rox
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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When you co-author how do you divide the points and funds? Just wondering about that. This is a sweet love letter, well two love letters and two poems, telling of the love separated lovers feel for each other. Well done. I saw no errors. Rox
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance. We're so glad you enjoyed it and found no errors. Regarding your question, we don't concern ourselves with which one of us is getting the points and funds. We have common goals and we work well together as a team.
Blessings,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My dad joined the Army before his draft number came up. He'd heard it was easier than if you were drafted. Not sure there's any truth to it, but who knows. I enjoyed reading. This is a good story.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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My dad joined the Army before his draft number came up. He'd heard it was easier than if you were drafted. Not sure there's any truth to it, but who knows. I enjoyed reading. This is a good story.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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We're glad you enjoyed Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Also, thank you for sharing about your dad. Chapter 3 is in the works now. Stay tuned!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from doggymad1
Interesting post and start to a longer work. The story is well written and the verses within add to it's poignancy. I look forward to reading more soon
Freda
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Interesting post and start to a longer work. The story is well written and the verses within add to it's poignancy. I look forward to reading more soon
Freda
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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We're glad you liked this and found it well-written. Also, that you felt the poetry was a nice addition. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance. It's great that you will be following along. Stay tuned because Chapter 3 is already in the works.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from JudyE
Lovers torn apart by war must suffer dreadfully. I can only hope your two characters come through in the end. Nothing to suggest and thanks for an entertaining read. The inclusion of the poems are a nice touch.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Lovers torn apart by war must suffer dreadfully. I can only hope your two characters come through in the end. Nothing to suggest and thanks for an entertaining read. The inclusion of the poems are a nice touch.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance. We're glad you enjoyed it and think the poems are a nice addition to it. Stay tuned for Chapter 3. It is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Alex Rosel
I enjoyed reading this a lot. You have fined-tuned your characters voices. The read flowed nicely. Thank you.
Just a couple of point:
My heart squeezed and I could feel my belly flop -- I don't know if this is down to a difference between the U.S. and the U.K., but flop here really means to let down, a failure. Personally, I think flip better. Just a thought.
Being a stickler for accuracy when a novel uses a real-life setting or circumstance, I checked the songs The Beatles played on their Ed Sullivan appearance. You're correct. A BIG THUMB UP for that!
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I enjoyed reading this a lot. You have fined-tuned your characters voices. The read flowed nicely. Thank you.
Just a couple of point:
My heart squeezed and I could feel my belly flop -- I don't know if this is down to a difference between the U.S. and the U.K., but flop here really means to let down, a failure. Personally, I think flip better. Just a thought.
Being a stickler for accuracy when a novel uses a real-life setting or circumstance, I checked the songs The Beatles played on their Ed Sullivan appearance. You're correct. A BIG THUMB UP for that!
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance and for the AWESOME 6 star rating! We are HONORED! Thank you also for pointing out the difference between flip and flop. What a great suggestion - it has been changed! We hope you come back to read Chapter 3. It is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from TheStoryMan
What a beautiful chapter. Their love sounds so sweet and beautiful. The poems were a lovely touch in their letters to each other. I hope he makes it back home to her.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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What a beautiful chapter. Their love sounds so sweet and beautiful. The poems were a lovely touch in their letters to each other. I hope he makes it back home to her.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Much appreciate your comments and we hope you'll come back to read more to find out what happens. Chapter 3 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Gail Denham
Fine start to your story - now some action - to combat the sadness. I've written many poems that are letters either from husband to wife or vise versa - from and to war zones. It's the little details that help make the story come alive - you've done this with your details. Good job.
Does the man's poem actually come from a guy? A guy might write shorter - what do you think?
My now husband and I began writing while he was stationed in Japan (after the second war ) he was so funny - sure made me want to meet him. All my girlfriends liked for me to read his letters aloud. He enlisted at l7 - and after he was away, got a draft notice. Hmmm.
Your story brings back memories.
good job.
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Fine start to your story - now some action - to combat the sadness. I've written many poems that are letters either from husband to wife or vise versa - from and to war zones. It's the little details that help make the story come alive - you've done this with your details. Good job.
Does the man's poem actually come from a guy? A guy might write shorter - what do you think?
My now husband and I began writing while he was stationed in Japan (after the second war ) he was so funny - sure made me want to meet him. All my girlfriends liked for me to read his letters aloud. He enlisted at l7 - and after he was away, got a draft notice. Hmmm.
Your story brings back memories.
good job.
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Hi Gail! We really appreciate you stopping by to read and review Chapter 2 of Love Long Distance. Thank you! Yes, the man's poem is actually written by a man - Bill (Commando). Thank you also for sharing some of your own story. Glad this brought back such great memories for you! Stay tuned--Chapter 3 coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy