Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

A very good description of a casual sexual encounter. Maybe if he gets lucky it will last... who knows?
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Thank you, Maria Jose!

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Well this is a very good entry for the category of the competition. Erotic and sensual. A perfect man's dream. I can't wait to find out if this was written by a man or a woman. Good luck in the competition. Jen.

 Comment Written 04-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Thanks for the read and review, Jen. I suspect you'll find out soon;^)

Comment from shaffer40

Excellent

I really enjoyed this story, told in perfect rhyme. Perfect description of a one-night stand, and since I'm a woman, I like hearing it from the man's point of view. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Thanks, Shaffer! But is it a man's point of view told by a man or a woman? We'll see;^)

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good read. I'm trying to think how to review this without being dirty. Hmm. This piece had a good flow to it and the imagery was really good. I think you definitely fulfilled the parameters of the contest. Good job and good luck.

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Thanks, 24! They didn't put any parameters on the nature of the review, so if you must;^)

Comment from Gypsymooncat

Excellent

Oh gee, this took me back to those "drunken contortions" of younger years lol! Well written, this bounced along...bit like your bed... ahem...yeah, bounced along and never lost its hold on this middle aged reader! Great entry! And exit I guess...um...y'know what I mean hahaha *blushes and giggles* Good luck!!

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Love your review, Gyspy, and glad it elicited "blushes and giggles." I've done my job!

Comment from susand3022

Exceptional

Hello Author! Hahahahahahahaha!!!!! Loved it! You may not get much from the Bible crowd here but I'm glad I pushed the 'go' button on this one! Definitely worth the read! That one's in the vein of waking up and realizing that you "don't even know your last name!" LOL

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Many thanks for the kind review and generous rating, Susan! And I agree about the audience, though I suspect the explicit warning deters many folks out of the gate. Although, if the 'read' to 'reviewed' ratio turns out to be quite high, some folks may be enjoying a guilty, anonymous pleasure;^)

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This sounds like a dream sequence that has suddenly taken on a life of its own! Good rhythm in the poem and in the action, too, one presumes. Loved that line, "blood leaving my head for my crotch".

 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Thanks, tfawcus!

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

You sure nailed this one. Very much a "Carnal Caper". And such a well-written romp. This scene is probably played out quite often by horny, hazy, hungover men and nymphomaniac, nameless women.

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 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 04-May-2019

Indeed, LisaMay. Thanks for the review!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A night of passion and names were the last thing on this couples mind as the physical act took over! He he he, a very descriptive write and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 03-May-2019

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reply by the author on 03-May-2019

Thanks, Dolly!