NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Spring Landscape By The Sea"National Poetry Writing Month
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet uplifting write Alicia, filled with summer sunshine and the setting suns and all the pleasures the season can offer, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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This is a sweet uplifting write Alicia, filled with summer sunshine and the setting suns and all the pleasures the season can offer, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely scenery - so peaceful and calming. I like the 's' word alliteration all throughout and the first line caught my attention with the tide rising to meet the setting sun.
"As a couple boats sail across the sea." (couple of)
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Lovely scenery - so peaceful and calming. I like the 's' word alliteration all throughout and the first line caught my attention with the tide rising to meet the setting sun.
"As a couple boats sail across the sea." (couple of)
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)