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National Poetry Writing Month
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Comment from
24chas
This was really good, sunnilicious. I liked the way this one read. The middle part was really cool with the cheer that was in there. Good message and well done.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
Hi! You're very nice. Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
Comment from
lyenochka
Yes, thank God that we have food to eat! Enjoyed your poem, Alicia. It's perfect as I prepare to eat my lunch!
My favorite lines were:
"And raw foods holds caveman admiration"
and
"Tasty foods are not a weakness"
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
Hi! Thank you. Enjoy that lunch. Have a great weekend :)
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