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NaPoWriMo 2019

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National Poetry Writing Month

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Comment from 24chas
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This was really good, sunnilicious. I liked the way this one read. The middle part was really cool with the cheer that was in there. Good message and well done.

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Hi! You're very nice. Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, thank God that we have food to eat! Enjoyed your poem, Alicia. It's perfect as I prepare to eat my lunch!

My favorite lines were:
"And raw foods holds caveman admiration"
and
"Tasty foods are not a weakness"

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Hi! Thank you. Enjoy that lunch. Have a great weekend :)