Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Goodbye - Chapter 1"A Wartime Romance
26 total reviews
Comment from Marjorie Burghdoff-Banks
"hide behind the barn" wow, what a sad picture this paints. Loved this chapter! Two young lovers without a future, moving into the unknown, great read. The idea of committing oneself to another without legalities appeals to me, the sadness of the story comes through loud and clear. I really want to know what happens next!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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"hide behind the barn" wow, what a sad picture this paints. Loved this chapter! Two young lovers without a future, moving into the unknown, great read. The idea of committing oneself to another without legalities appeals to me, the sadness of the story comes through loud and clear. I really want to know what happens next!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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We really appreciate and like what you've shared here. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 1 of Love Long Distance. We are so glad that you will be following along. Chapter 2 is in the works and coming soon!
Blessings,
Bill & Cathy
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Can't wait
Comment from Cass Carlton
Spag: inequities.I believe this should be spelt "iniquities".
This has an interesting start and looks promising. I will be waiting for the next chapter(s). Co-authored books aren't easy to write, but you just might succeed with this one as there are two points of view and two protagonists. I will be watching for your next episodes, so please P/M me when they are posted. No, I know what I'll do. I'll become a fan. That way I won't miss any chapters at all, will I? Happy writing children cheers Cass
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Spag: inequities.I believe this should be spelt "iniquities".
This has an interesting start and looks promising. I will be waiting for the next chapter(s). Co-authored books aren't easy to write, but you just might succeed with this one as there are two points of view and two protagonists. I will be watching for your next episodes, so please P/M me when they are posted. No, I know what I'll do. I'll become a fan. That way I won't miss any chapters at all, will I? Happy writing children cheers Cass
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Hi Cass!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 1 of Love Long Distance. We really appreciate your correction. It is now fixed. Hurrah! Awesome comments and we're so glad you will be following along. Thank you also for becoming a fan! :)
Blessings,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Ulla
Hi to both of you. This is a great start to a wonderful love story, I believe. I will certainly be looking out for more. It's about two people being torn apart from war. A theme as old as time eternal. I'll be looking out for more. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Hi to both of you. This is a great start to a wonderful love story, I believe. I will certainly be looking out for more. It's about two people being torn apart from war. A theme as old as time eternal. I'll be looking out for more. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Hi Ulla!
Thanks so much for stopping by to read and review Chapter 1 of Love Long Distance. So glad you enjoyed it and will be following along. Chapter 2 is in the works and coming soon. All the best to you, too!
Blessings,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is beautiful and I enjoyed reading. I can't wait to read more. These are good characters and the story line is very good. It happens often to people who are familiar with the military.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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This is beautiful and I enjoyed reading. I can't wait to read more. These are good characters and the story line is very good. It happens often to people who are familiar with the military.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Hi Barbara!
Thank you SO MUCH for your AWESOME 6-star rating and review. We are HONORED! So glad you enjoyed Chapter 1 and that you'll be following along. We are working on Chapter 2 now so stay tuned!
Blessings,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Shirley McLain
OK, you have me hooked with that heartbreaking goodbye. I have to find out what is happening next. You did an excellent job and you deserve the six I'm going to give you. Your words made me sad. Great job. Have a great night. Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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OK, you have me hooked with that heartbreaking goodbye. I have to find out what is happening next. You did an excellent job and you deserve the six I'm going to give you. Your words made me sad. Great job. Have a great night. Shirley
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME 6-star rating and review. We are HONORED and so glad you enjoyed Chapter 1 and are hooked already. Chapter 2 in the works and coming soon!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Tpa
This chapter was beautifully written. I enjoyed every single aspect of the item. The Author(s) has paid particular attention to the language used and the words were chosen. Every single grammar issue has been resolved and there are no spelling mistakes. Very GOOD.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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This chapter was beautifully written. I enjoyed every single aspect of the item. The Author(s) has paid particular attention to the language used and the words were chosen. Every single grammar issue has been resolved and there are no spelling mistakes. Very GOOD.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for your awesome review and rating. We really appreciate you stopping by to read the intro and first chapter. I'm glad you found it beautifully written and enjoyed every aspect of it. More to come soon!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sasha
YOu captured my full interest with this first chapter of your book Love Long Distance. I was a teenager during this time of upheaval and am fascinated by your introduction to the story line. This is well written and I cannot see any need changes or corrections. I anxiously look forward to Chapter 2.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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YOu captured my full interest with this first chapter of your book Love Long Distance. I was a teenager during this time of upheaval and am fascinated by your introduction to the story line. This is well written and I cannot see any need changes or corrections. I anxiously look forward to Chapter 2.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Wow! So glad you enjoyed the beginning of our book and you will be following along as we write it. More to come soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Also, we really appreciate you sharing that you were a teenager during this time.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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I enjoyed it very much
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was an excellent beginning, Tootie, and it sounds like it will be a really good story. Saying goodbye to someone you love when they are going to war, is awful. I think this book will do well as war and romance always goes down well. Well done, my I look forward to the second part. :) Sandra x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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That was an excellent beginning, Tootie, and it sounds like it will be a really good story. Saying goodbye to someone you love when they are going to war, is awful. I think this book will do well as war and romance always goes down well. Well done, my I look forward to the second part. :) Sandra x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Hi Sandra! So glad you enjoyed it and we both believe it will be a really good story, too. It's an honor to share it with everyone on FanStory as we write it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. Next chapter coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a very intriguing start to a promising story. It's well-written, interesting, the characters seem real, believable someone a reader can relate too. I look forward to reading more, although I have a feeling I'll need a box of tissues beside me. Well done. Bill, thank you for your service.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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This is a very intriguing start to a promising story. It's well-written, interesting, the characters seem real, believable someone a reader can relate too. I look forward to reading more, although I have a feeling I'll need a box of tissues beside me. Well done. Bill, thank you for your service.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing the intro and first chapter to Love Long Distance. We are so glad you enjoyed it! We are both very happy you'll be back to read more. Thank you also for your comment to Bill. So very much appreciated!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It looks as though it will be interesting. I think everyone loves a good love story no matter how it ends love is a wonderful thing to explore. I will be with you as you post Good luck with the book. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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It looks as though it will be interesting. I think everyone loves a good love story no matter how it ends love is a wonderful thing to explore. I will be with you as you post Good luck with the book. Nancy:)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Hi Nancy, Thank you so much for reading and reviewing the intro and Chapter 1 of this novel. We are very happy that you will be following along! Thank you also for the good luck! We are looking forward to sharing the next chapter soon. It's in the works. :)
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy