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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was lovely. I can understand why you won, it really does have it all, as your last line says. It's also full of good advice, which wouldn't harm anyone to follow. Well done. :) Sandra xx
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That was lovely. I can understand why you won, it really does have it all, as your last line says. It's also full of good advice, which wouldn't harm anyone to follow. Well done. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from nomi338
Simple, sweet, to the point, to the heart. This is writing at its best and most honest point. Beautiful sonnets, skillful haikus, odes that bring tears. They all work best if in the hnads of those who appreciate and understand them. A simple heartfelt poem that speaks in plain everyday terms that reach the heart of the many, I believe, works best. That is exactly what you did. Congratulations
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Simple, sweet, to the point, to the heart. This is writing at its best and most honest point. Beautiful sonnets, skillful haikus, odes that bring tears. They all work best if in the hnads of those who appreciate and understand them. A simple heartfelt poem that speaks in plain everyday terms that reach the heart of the many, I believe, works best. That is exactly what you did. Congratulations
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from kiwijenny
This is sublime in its simplicity...and it's message is true for all, everyone needs to love more. Well done/ well deserving of kudos and ribbons. I am going to read it to my class if that's ok.
God bless
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This is sublime in its simplicity...and it's message is true for all, everyone needs to love more. Well done/ well deserving of kudos and ribbons. I am going to read it to my class if that's ok.
God bless
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your poem's exquisite rhythm and rhyme captured me and congratulations on your winning poem! Your picture perfectly fits your thoughts and verses.
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Dear Author,
Your poem's exquisite rhythm and rhyme captured me and congratulations on your winning poem! Your picture perfectly fits your thoughts and verses.
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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I really appreciate your remarks and six stars. I wrote
the poem many years ago. Happy you enjoyed it.
And thanks for the congratulations.
Comment from Dutchie
Wonderful poem with wonderful rhyme. The message is great.
When we share and open our hearts we are loved. If you make people happy, you will be happy too. A real winner!!! Fia
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Wonderful poem with wonderful rhyme. The message is great.
When we share and open our hearts we are loved. If you make people happy, you will be happy too. A real winner!!! Fia
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
I can see why you won the contest because this is fine. Truthful, straight forward and poetic too.
Great job and a pleasure to read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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I can see why you won the contest because this is fine. Truthful, straight forward and poetic too.
Great job and a pleasure to read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2019
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Thank you Gloria. I appreciate your review and five stars. I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem, it was my pleasure writing it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Wow! I see why this was a winner! Great job. Your lines flow smoothly with great rhymes and an even greater message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Wow! I see why this was a winner! Great job. Your lines flow smoothly with great rhymes and an even greater message. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from LIJ Red
Start, heart, tall and all....eight lines that rhyme where they are called on.
Short lines, but that is acceptable according to the prompt...looks like an excellent entry to me.
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Start, heart, tall and all....eight lines that rhyme where they are called on.
Short lines, but that is acceptable according to the prompt...looks like an excellent entry to me.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Well written poem. Congratulations on the contest win. It is so true, If we are loved, we have it all. A very enjoyable read. No edits or adjustments necessary.
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Well written poem. Congratulations on the contest win. It is so true, If we are loved, we have it all. A very enjoyable read. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from WryWriter
Simplistic yet deep I find this poetic work. Follows writing prompt guidelines. The message a wonderful one. Good artwork choice for theme.
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Simplistic yet deep I find this poetic work. Follows writing prompt guidelines. The message a wonderful one. Good artwork choice for theme.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019