NaPoWriMo 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Mall Vacation"National Poetry Writing Month
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Comment from 24chas
I enjoyed this piece, sunnilicious. I think you captured the feeling of happiness you would get by going to the Mall of America. The rhyme scheme lent itself to that feeling. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I enjoyed this piece, sunnilicious. I think you captured the feeling of happiness you would get by going to the Mall of America. The rhyme scheme lent itself to that feeling. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
I've heard of it and never wanted to go because I'm not much of a shopper. But I heard because of online stores, even this mall may be in jeopardy.
Good job with the poem which really gets across the shopping pressure!
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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I've heard of it and never wanted to go because I'm not much of a shopper. But I heard because of online stores, even this mall may be in jeopardy.
Good job with the poem which really gets across the shopping pressure!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Hi! I think there's a reason for the supermall. Quality family time, maybe. Thank you :)