Smile
There is nothing as lovely16 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
It does indeed. There is something so appealing in a little girl's smile that is highly contagious. This is a strong contender for the one line poem contest. Good luck
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It does indeed. There is something so appealing in a little girl's smile that is highly contagious. This is a strong contender for the one line poem contest. Good luck
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Rachelle Allen
You certainly have THIS right! And their laughter, too. I love listening to children laugh. I also think the picture that goes with this one-line poem is a perfect match. Good luck to you in the contest! xo
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You certainly have THIS right! And their laughter, too. I love listening to children laugh. I also think the picture that goes with this one-line poem is a perfect match. Good luck to you in the contest! xo
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from patcelaw
Indeed when a little girl or little boy for that matter, they do make this life worthwhile and our hearts are softened. May your weekend be blessed.
Patricia
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Indeed when a little girl or little boy for that matter, they do make this life worthwhile and our hearts are softened. May your weekend be blessed.
Patricia
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Many thanks and Happy weekend. Jen.x
Comment from poetwatch
So true! The picture made me smile and the words lite up my face, JENINTORRE.
I always find it hard to review a poem that is only one line, but your is great so no problem in that, :) This is a great entry for the One Line Poem contest. Thank you for sharing.
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So true! The picture made me smile and the words lite up my face, JENINTORRE.
I always find it hard to review a poem that is only one line, but your is great so no problem in that, :) This is a great entry for the One Line Poem contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Many thanks for the great review. Jen.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, and doesn't that just say it all!! :) ;) What a precious and so true offering for the contest, Jen -- and she is simply beautiful! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :) Yvette
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Oh, and doesn't that just say it all!! :) ;) What a precious and so true offering for the contest, Jen -- and she is simply beautiful! :) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :) Yvette
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much Yvette. X
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nice work on this one, Jen. I 've read so many of these, and if I'm being entirely honest, this is the first one that poetic and one line. Nice use of internal rhyme! Good Luck!
Take care,
Russell
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Nice work on this one, Jen. I 've read so many of these, and if I'm being entirely honest, this is the first one that poetic and one line. Nice use of internal rhyme! Good Luck!
Take care,
Russell
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Russell for the great review. Jen.
