Shards
A Swap Quatrain Rhyming Poem Entry14 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, June. I like the way you stated your message in this one. The flow was good and the rhyme scheme made it smooth. Good job and good message.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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This was a good read, June. I like the way you stated your message in this one. The flow was good and the rhyme scheme made it smooth. Good job and good message.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an ideal poem for the Swap Quatrain form June as we reap what we sow in life and what we teach our children is so important, your words ring so true, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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This is an ideal poem for the Swap Quatrain form June as we reap what we sow in life and what we teach our children is so important, your words ring so true, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Appreciate very much your encouraging comments and insights, as always, Dolly.
Comment from patcelaw
This is one of those poems where I do so wish I had a six for it. Your message is spot on in how we need to deal with our children with the words we use. Many a young life has gone off the rails because of those glass shard words were flung at them and damaged the heart of the child.
Patricia
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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This is one of those poems where I do so wish I had a six for it. Your message is spot on in how we need to deal with our children with the words we use. Many a young life has gone off the rails because of those glass shard words were flung at them and damaged the heart of the child.
Patricia
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Appreciate very much your encouraging comments and insights
Comment from Irish Rain
How beautiful Miss June.
So very true, our words can be
a forever blessing or harm. None
are easily forgotten, and they
do come back to reward or haunt.
A lovely entry in this contest.
Blessings...
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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How beautiful Miss June.
So very true, our words can be
a forever blessing or harm. None
are easily forgotten, and they
do come back to reward or haunt.
A lovely entry in this contest.
Blessings...
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2019
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Appreciate very much your encouraging comments and insights
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You're welcome!