Little Boons
Asking for words from the Divine15 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about words that we ask God to lay in our minds to share it with our readers that enjoy our thoughts and form ideas of their own. It is always great to read another's thoughts that can uplift our souls too.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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A very well-written poem about words that we ask God to lay in our minds to share it with our readers that enjoy our thoughts and form ideas of their own. It is always great to read another's thoughts that can uplift our souls too.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Miss Sherry
This song of the spirit is lovely. I long for my spirit to be free and when I go to the Father it will fly with joy and thanksgiving. I know what you speak of here is different from what I believe, yet there is such a kinship of ideas. I admire all you have accomplished and your poem is wonderful.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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This song of the spirit is lovely. I long for my spirit to be free and when I go to the Father it will fly with joy and thanksgiving. I know what you speak of here is different from what I believe, yet there is such a kinship of ideas. I admire all you have accomplished and your poem is wonderful.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thank you. we are not so far apart. This is an abstract poem although you can see a finish.
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Great poem, dear Author!!
Comment from papa55mike
This is wonderfully written and I love the picture. I also love to write for the Lord, I've dedicated many of my works to Him. Please think about putting a poem in a contest, this site has a million of them. I wish I had a 6 for you. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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This is wonderfully written and I love the picture. I also love to write for the Lord, I've dedicated many of my works to Him. Please think about putting a poem in a contest, this site has a million of them. I wish I had a 6 for you. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the review. Have entered lots of contests. My writing varies. Not always spiritual. God Bless us all!!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we become so self aware we don't match up to our ideal, but we all harbour some sin in life, we just need the confidence to admit it and be ourselves, wise words here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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When we become so self aware we don't match up to our ideal, but we all harbour some sin in life, we just need the confidence to admit it and be ourselves, wise words here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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Thanks Dolly. When in the presence of Divinity the comparison is not even close.
Comment from Ronni
This is a very unique supplication to Divine for the 'words' in little 'boons'
serving as reminders and guidelines needed to progress through trials
and woes, and feel spiritual reassurance from Divine, to indeed, go from
the unknown to the known. Most captivating artwork enhances your
message and motivations from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing
this inspiring spiritual quest. Do indeed keep writing more!!
Best wishes, Ronni
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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This is a very unique supplication to Divine for the 'words' in little 'boons'
serving as reminders and guidelines needed to progress through trials
and woes, and feel spiritual reassurance from Divine, to indeed, go from
the unknown to the known. Most captivating artwork enhances your
message and motivations from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing
this inspiring spiritual quest. Do indeed keep writing more!!
Best wishes, Ronni
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
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The unconscious feeds the conscious mind. I look hard to find an appropriate photo. I had another in mind but could not find it. I think this is a better one.
