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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "St. Louis Chapter 2 part 3"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from Tootsie55
Look what's still around! Not sure for how much longer. Enjoying your new story. Is the dog Edger or EDGAR? Maybe edger as he keeps people on edge hehe? Just one tiny spag on this round. toward the stairs. "Can you make i(t?")
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Look what's still around! Not sure for how much longer. Enjoying your new story. Is the dog Edger or EDGAR? Maybe edger as he keeps people on edge hehe? Just one tiny spag on this round. toward the stairs. "Can you make i(t?")
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I'll get it fixed. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from SLMorrical
I love the dog picture. Rottweilers make good guard dogs, but they can be just a big baby. I think it was very sweet that Logan went to the store to get groceries and made Mac something to eat. Logan is another looks mean, but is a big softy. I love that Mac called him a pain in the butt. Logan is smitten and I think he would do anything to protect Mac at this point. Very well done edition to your story.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I love the dog picture. Rottweilers make good guard dogs, but they can be just a big baby. I think it was very sweet that Logan went to the store to get groceries and made Mac something to eat. Logan is another looks mean, but is a big softy. I love that Mac called him a pain in the butt. Logan is smitten and I think he would do anything to protect Mac at this point. Very well done edition to your story.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I like the way you got my interest in this chapter about it seems to me Logan is getting more determined to figure who murdered McKenzie sister.
Do I see a new romance brewing between Logan and McKenzie?
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hello Barb
I like the way you got my interest in this chapter about it seems to me Logan is getting more determined to figure who murdered McKenzie sister.
Do I see a new romance brewing between Logan and McKenzie?
Gert
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I have a feeling before the end of the story, this two will form some sort of a relationship,
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Now that sounds really good to me
Gert
Comment from light
I do hope Logan can be st ease with the dogs. It looks like the story is progressing at a good pace. Your descriptive writing keeps everything clear, and you dialogue is appropriate.
Elaine
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I do hope Logan can be st ease with the dogs. It looks like the story is progressing at a good pace. Your descriptive writing keeps everything clear, and you dialogue is appropriate.
Elaine
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement,
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I love Edgar, tho I do think Goliath is a better name. Mac is smart to have such a scary dog since she lives alone. The dog won't protect her from Logan, though. I have a feeling he'll find his way into her heart. :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I love Edgar, tho I do think Goliath is a better name. Mac is smart to have such a scary dog since she lives alone. The dog won't protect her from Logan, though. I have a feeling he'll find his way into her heart. :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I have a feeling you're right. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
I love your style of writing. One can always look for a dog or dogs involved. From special investigators falling off cliffs and befriending couple of dogs and a girl and romance finds away to mysterious paintings bringing love to the top of things and now we dive deeper in the water of mystery. You are an excellent novelist.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I love your style of writing. One can always look for a dog or dogs involved. From special investigators falling off cliffs and befriending couple of dogs and a girl and romance finds away to mysterious paintings bringing love to the top of things and now we dive deeper in the water of mystery. You are an excellent novelist.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your encouragement. I love dogs and feel they should be part of realistic life.
Comment from judiverse
This is excellent. You handle all the angles well. There seems to be a budding romance going although they don't know it yet. I enjoy the introduction of the dogs. They add interest. Someone really wanted to harm Mac. Mac talks to Logan about her mother and father being murdered. This could have something to do with the attack on Mac. The man who was accused died in prison, but maybe the wrong man was charged with the murders. That might be one explanation for Mac being a threat to someone. judi
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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This is excellent. You handle all the angles well. There seems to be a budding romance going although they don't know it yet. I enjoy the introduction of the dogs. They add interest. Someone really wanted to harm Mac. Mac talks to Logan about her mother and father being murdered. This could have something to do with the attack on Mac. The man who was accused died in prison, but maybe the wrong man was charged with the murders. That might be one explanation for Mac being a threat to someone. judi
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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We'll have to see. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. No advance notice, huh? judi
Comment from Miss Sherry
I like this a lot so far. Give me a couple of dogs and a cute guy and I am along for the ride. You keep the action to a reasonable amount - no flowery overkill. It is a comfortable pace for the reader and you left us with a mystery. Very good writing!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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I like this a lot so far. Give me a couple of dogs and a cute guy and I am along for the ride. You keep the action to a reasonable amount - no flowery overkill. It is a comfortable pace for the reader and you left us with a mystery. Very good writing!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, now, I think y=this was a great chapter. it consolidates a few things and I liked the interaction between Logan and Mac. We also learn about the parents traumatic death. Loved the scene with the dog. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hi Barbara, now, I think y=this was a great chapter. it consolidates a few things and I liked the interaction between Logan and Mac. We also learn about the parents traumatic death. Loved the scene with the dog. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent reading as always. I don't think I have ever read your work and found anything out of place. I look forward to reading more of this story. Shirley
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Excellent reading as always. I don't think I have ever read your work and found anything out of place. I look forward to reading more of this story. Shirley
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate you dropping by.
