A Summer Day on Grandpas Farm
For those who love farms36 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good RodG. You've done an excellent job in describing Grandpa's farm in great detail. The picture you've painted with your words can be seen without the superb accompanying artwork. I like this well written offering. Well done! Congratulations on your win!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This is really good RodG. You've done an excellent job in describing Grandpa's farm in great detail. The picture you've painted with your words can be seen without the superb accompanying artwork. I like this well written offering. Well done! Congratulations on your win!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Thank you very much, Jeffrey, for sharing A SUMMER DAY and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh my goodness, RodG!! NO WONDER this won!! This is absolutely beautiful. Tender, warm, full child-driven memories. Heartiest of congratulations to you!! xo
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Oh my goodness, RodG!! NO WONDER this won!! This is absolutely beautiful. Tender, warm, full child-driven memories. Heartiest of congratulations to you!! xo
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I am honored and truly thrilled by your reaction to A SUMMER DAY, Rachelle. Many thanks! Rod
Comment from Yvon
Liked the poem. Reminded me of my brother-in-laws farm when I was a kid. They had a cow that they milked everyday. Just the one for family and friends. The milk however was always warm from ole Betsy. Must have been cold summer nights.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Liked the poem. Reminded me of my brother-in-laws farm when I was a kid. They had a cow that they milked everyday. Just the one for family and friends. The milk however was always warm from ole Betsy. Must have been cold summer nights.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I am delighted I could put you back on the farm with A SUMMER DAY, Yvon. Thanks so much for sharing. Several reviewers pointed out to me that the milk would be warm, not cold. Rod
Comment from Cedar
This is a terrific poem, I really enjoyed reading it.
I've lived on a farm all my life and I simply wouldn't want to be anywhere else. It's hard work at times but without all the stress and aggravation as other jobs have.
You've got my vote and right now it looks like this one is a winner. So, I wish you an early "Congratulations." Bill
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This is a terrific poem, I really enjoyed reading it.
I've lived on a farm all my life and I simply wouldn't want to be anywhere else. It's hard work at times but without all the stress and aggravation as other jobs have.
You've got my vote and right now it looks like this one is a winner. So, I wish you an early "Congratulations." Bill
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hey, I truly appreciate your vote and early congrats. It is fun to write a poem others, like yourself, can easily relate to, having lived on a farm. Many thanks for the high praise. Rod
Comment from Mark D. R.
Today is the day to vote for this.
I like your illustration and verse, but your title needs an apostrophe for your "Grandpas" - that agrees with your text for your entry.
We all miss our Grandpas. Sadly, I only knew one, my children neither. My spouse had that same missing experience.
Your rhyming is spot on.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Today is the day to vote for this.
I like your illustration and verse, but your title needs an apostrophe for your "Grandpas" - that agrees with your text for your entry.
We all miss our Grandpas. Sadly, I only knew one, my children neither. My spouse had that same missing experience.
Your rhyming is spot on.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Mark. Thanks so much for sharing A SUMMER DAY and your kind praise. I don't know what to do about that apostrophe. When I put one in, FanStory converts it to a question mark. Rod
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those FanStory kerflooeys should not happen - they need to fix those system issues. We should not be penalized for having our posts messed up by FS.
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I agree. I know they know there is a software problem which has not always existed. Rod
Comment from Thomas Bowling
When I was a kid I worked on my grandfather's farm. On my first day, my cousin and I planted tomatoes all day. At the end of the day, he asked what do I owe you? I sa fifty cents. He chucked and gave me a fifty cent piece. My cousin said I've been doing this for three years. I only ask for a quarter. You brought back fond memories. Good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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When I was a kid I worked on my grandfather's farm. On my first day, my cousin and I planted tomatoes all day. At the end of the day, he asked what do I owe you? I sa fifty cents. He chucked and gave me a fifty cent piece. My cousin said I've been doing this for three years. I only ask for a quarter. You brought back fond memories. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I enjoyed your story, Thomas. I once picked tomatoes with migrant workers in a field in California. I lasted half a day. So pleased A SUMMER DAY brought back memories. Rod
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your well-written nostalgic poem touched me. I love the picture and your memories of a gentle grandpa!
My best in winning the contest!
Deborah
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
Your well-written nostalgic poem touched me. I love the picture and your memories of a gentle grandpa!
My best in winning the contest!
Deborah
Comment Written 14-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Deborah. I truly appreciate your kind response to A SUMMER DAY. I am especially pleased you found it touching. Rod
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Thank you
Comment from JudyE
I grew up on a farm and can so relate to this. We have a small acreage now but I remember the days when we were milking cows and tending sheep and horses. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I grew up on a farm and can so relate to this. We have a small acreage now but I remember the days when we were milking cows and tending sheep and horses. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I was hoping to reach readers like you who grew up on a farm. Many thanks for sharing A SUMMER DAY. ROD
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very poignant poem especially the last line, that caused a lump in my throat. The delightful artwork is perfectly chosen. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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This is a very poignant poem especially the last line, that caused a lump in my throat. The delightful artwork is perfectly chosen. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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I am so pleased A SUMMER DAY brought a lump to your throat. I enjoyed writing it and telling the Speaker's story of that one day with Grandpa. Rod
Comment from bob cullen
It brings back so many memories. And your description are so good, with one exception. When we were kids and our dad was milking our lone Jersey, we'd always go out and get a glass full of fresh milk. But it wasn't cold, it was warm.
Loved the poem, it took me back more than fifty years. Thank you
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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It brings back so many memories. And your description are so good, with one exception. When we were kids and our dad was milking our lone Jersey, we'd always go out and get a glass full of fresh milk. But it wasn't cold, it was warm.
Loved the poem, it took me back more than fifty years. Thank you
Comment Written 13-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
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Hi Bob. I am delighted I could bring back fond memories of days on the farm. You are correct about the milk being warm, not cold. Many thanks for sharing. Rod