Ghost
A True Story15 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
It's amazing how many young people lose a parent when they are needed most. Well, you have followed the directions for writing a Pleidades Poem ". I don't know if I, in good conscience , can pronounce "Pleidades" However I do wish you good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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It's amazing how many young people lose a parent when they are needed most. Well, you have followed the directions for writing a Pleidades Poem ". I don't know if I, in good conscience , can pronounce "Pleidades" However I do wish you good luck.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this nice review. I can pronounce it only because my son is an astronomy buff. :)
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I appreciate your reply and your son.
Comment from JudyE
This is a lovely poem and it must have been a huge consolation at the time to have him reassure you in this way. And I'm sure your Dad is continuing to watch over you.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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This is a lovely poem and it must have been a huge consolation at the time to have him reassure you in this way. And I'm sure your Dad is continuing to watch over you.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I'm sure he is...I feel him close by when I'm Troubled. Thank you for reading. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very touching write filled with grief but also a sense of closeness as coming to terms with loss is often difficult to overcome, I hardly realised it was Pleiades poetry, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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This is a very touching write filled with grief but also a sense of closeness as coming to terms with loss is often difficult to overcome, I hardly realised it was Pleiades poetry, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this nice review. It means a lot coming from such a talented poet as yourself.
Comment from gramalot8
Thanks for sharing this with us. A beautiful heartfelt poem with your wonderful message and experience. What a comfort for you. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thanks for sharing this with us. A beautiful heartfelt poem with your wonderful message and experience. What a comfort for you. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Artasylum
This is a fun contest... its parameters are fun... so good luck in the contest. Loss of this kind is overwhelming but you are right he will always be looking down and offering up guidance... yours, diana
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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This is a fun contest... its parameters are fun... so good luck in the contest. Loss of this kind is overwhelming but you are right he will always be looking down and offering up guidance... yours, diana
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you. This was my first attempt at this kind of poetry and you're right...its fun. Thanks again.
