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Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Prayer is not monologue, but dialogue; God's voice is its most essential part. One should never hesitate to talk to God whenever your heart desires it. God will always walk the talk. I find this poem very imaginatively penned. Spiritual. Interesting. Thanks for sharing!
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Prayer is not monologue, but dialogue; God's voice is its most essential part. One should never hesitate to talk to God whenever your heart desires it. God will always walk the talk. I find this poem very imaginatively penned. Spiritual. Interesting. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2021
Comment from Goodadvicechan
You raise a lot of questions in this poem. First, I agree with you that: " Only God knows each man's issues, problems, wants and required needs... God knows each man by name and of place."
Since he understands who people are, people should pray to god to share their feelings snd wishes.
Thanks for sharing
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You raise a lot of questions in this poem. First, I agree with you that: " Only God knows each man's issues, problems, wants and required needs... God knows each man by name and of place."
Since he understands who people are, people should pray to god to share their feelings snd wishes.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
Comment from dovemarie
DearALCREATOR, wonderful acrostic, contains a lot of info. and feelings and names for God and what he is, does, and says. You used great words at the beginning of each line. Hope your entry from 2019 did well! Dove
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DearALCREATOR, wonderful acrostic, contains a lot of info. and feelings and names for God and what he is, does, and says. You used great words at the beginning of each line. Hope your entry from 2019 did well! Dove
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi Daniel,
I appreciate your extensive notes, yet they are not necessary for me...I understand why you posted them. "God is religion free" Amen to that!
I'm not sure where to begin. There is nothing that you have written here
that I disagree with. I would probably need to bookcase this and go over
your strong poem at a later date.
These lines stood out to me wearing bells and sounding whistles:
"Wise fool, self-declared, self-taught fake preachers, and canvassers of God Interpret God a 'deaf-dumb-blind' God among some fanatic followers"
Yup! This is another one of my favorite lines of yours:
"God is invisible to some men, but visible to a few"
Also...very true. Thank you so much for sharing your
faith like a fierce lion - a poetic Fierce Lion of God.
AnnaLinda
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Hi Daniel,
I appreciate your extensive notes, yet they are not necessary for me...I understand why you posted them. "God is religion free" Amen to that!
I'm not sure where to begin. There is nothing that you have written here
that I disagree with. I would probably need to bookcase this and go over
your strong poem at a later date.
These lines stood out to me wearing bells and sounding whistles:
"Wise fool, self-declared, self-taught fake preachers, and canvassers of God Interpret God a 'deaf-dumb-blind' God among some fanatic followers"
Yup! This is another one of my favorite lines of yours:
"God is invisible to some men, but visible to a few"
Also...very true. Thank you so much for sharing your
faith like a fierce lion - a poetic Fierce Lion of God.
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
Comment from Raul1
God has created us as equal. I like your message in your poetry. It's very inspirational. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
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God has created us as equal. I like your message in your poetry. It's very inspirational. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
Comment from Melodie Michelle
This is an EXCELLENT poem and a very intellectual poem as well that is intriguing and very well written indeed!
I love your descriptions of God they are so close to how I see Him;-)
Thank you so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)
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This is an EXCELLENT poem and a very intellectual poem as well that is intriguing and very well written indeed!
I love your descriptions of God they are so close to how I see Him;-)
Thank you so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
Comment from MARIANNE GI
Wow! I have no words actually. All you wrote need a lot of thinking. My poor Enlish did not help me in many paragraphs to understand much, but as I have understood, you are very intellectual. Your thoughts and knowledge are depicted on your writing and I can't catch up! Excellent work! Just to advise you to Bold the first letters of each sentence in order to be shown that it is acrostic, unless you did that on purpose
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Wow! I have no words actually. All you wrote need a lot of thinking. My poor Enlish did not help me in many paragraphs to understand much, but as I have understood, you are very intellectual. Your thoughts and knowledge are depicted on your writing and I can't catch up! Excellent work! Just to advise you to Bold the first letters of each sentence in order to be shown that it is acrostic, unless you did that on purpose
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
The piece was wordy as I stumbled a bit when reading it aloud. There are so many questions, that is the feeling I am left with after reading this piece. And so many answers that we will never get.
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The piece was wordy as I stumbled a bit when reading it aloud. There are so many questions, that is the feeling I am left with after reading this piece. And so many answers that we will never get.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from joycetreasures
Alcreator,
This is an amazing acrostic free poem from your preciuous heart. God decides I believe, who He chooses to share of His handy work in His beautiful creation, the earth. Also, I believe if we draw near to our Father, He will draw near to us. You have a wonderful title for your poem, "Clarify Me...". If people would simply believe that God is a living God who cares about us from the beginning to the End. He is LOVE. He made everything through His Word (John 1:1). The Holy Bible is God's love letter to us. This is a beautiful poem of your heartfelt feelings about God, the world, and Sin. Thank you for sharing all the descriptive beautiful words about God, life, and the Sin of man. Happy writing. You are an excellent poet.
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Alcreator,
This is an amazing acrostic free poem from your preciuous heart. God decides I believe, who He chooses to share of His handy work in His beautiful creation, the earth. Also, I believe if we draw near to our Father, He will draw near to us. You have a wonderful title for your poem, "Clarify Me...". If people would simply believe that God is a living God who cares about us from the beginning to the End. He is LOVE. He made everything through His Word (John 1:1). The Holy Bible is God's love letter to us. This is a beautiful poem of your heartfelt feelings about God, the world, and Sin. Thank you for sharing all the descriptive beautiful words about God, life, and the Sin of man. Happy writing. You are an excellent poet.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
I remember well that my calculus teacher in high school had a pat saying, "The Creator doesn't see fit to reveal all the secrets of His universe. In other words, "God keeps His Justice ever secret and confidential." I like having had the opportunity to reflect on your words.
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I remember well that my calculus teacher in high school had a pat saying, "The Creator doesn't see fit to reveal all the secrets of His universe. In other words, "God keeps His Justice ever secret and confidential." I like having had the opportunity to reflect on your words.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020