The Sick Chickens Have Arrived
The cock is crowing on the dung hill.12 total reviews
Comment from Randa Dayle
Very clever, the 5-7-5 played out very well. And I especially enjoyed your commentary after the fact. It's like a fable, you the moral is type of poem.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Very clever, the 5-7-5 played out very well. And I especially enjoyed your commentary after the fact. It's like a fable, you the moral is type of poem.
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your review. Interesting that you should mention a fable... just the other day I entered a reworked modern fable in a contest and this poem is a follow up from the groove i was in when writing that piece.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, unknown poet. Good flow and, better yet, a good message for everyone. I liked the artwork as well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, unknown poet. Good flow and, better yet, a good message for everyone. I liked the artwork as well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I think people are sick to death of political commentary these days, but it is always a good idea to pay attention to one's own back yard.
