Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I just love the ending to this!!
Yay for him!
As in your notes, it turned out to be a good thing!
Very uplifting poem!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for a great review. I'm glad you liked the ending.
Connie

reply by Irish Rain on 19-Feb-2019

You're welcome!

Comment from AdaJulie

Excellent

At last, the weeks and months flew by
until he finally could see,
with all his texts and no reply,
she had moved on and so must he........I love this.....because one thing that is true for all is that tume heals....Great job

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019

Thanks so much for your review.
Connie

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

You have so very aptly shown in this well worded poem how things can happen these days. I cannot imagine getting a text to say the relationship was over. That seems to me as a cold heart type move. Patricia

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019

Thank you, Patricia, for your thoughtful review.
Connie

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good read, Connie C. I think Sue probably learned a lesson by the end of this piece. Good flow and rhyme scheme made it lively. Nice job of writing.

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019

That you for your most encouraging review.
Connie

Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

I really liked it, and I think it is terrible to use a text for such a personal thing. I would tell my boys that they don't ask a lady out by texting her. That is not proper.

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019

Thank you so much, Randa, for your review.
Connie