Stupid Cupid!
Ever wonder how they ended up together in the first place..?54 total reviews
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Yep - I know nobody out there reads this, but I'm just compelled to thank you for the recognition of my 'non-romantic' V-Day write....you got the real me in that one! :) ;) LOL! :) Thanx again! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
Well, maybe I'll come in somewhere in the running. Yvette you wrote a wonderful Valentines poem. You made me smile. You accomplished what I always try to do when I write poetry. Place a smile in one's heart. This is a very good entry for the Valentine Poem contest. :) :)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Well, maybe I'll come in somewhere in the running. Yvette you wrote a wonderful Valentines poem. You made me smile. You accomplished what I always try to do when I write poetry. Place a smile in one's heart. This is a very good entry for the Valentine Poem contest. :) :)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Oh, Jose, I needed those words of encouragement today...thank you so very much, my friend! :) :) This was certainly the real me on the big V-Day .... never was a hearts-n-roses kindof gal, and this was just what the doctor called for .... smiles and no mush! :) :) Thanx for the wonderful comments and for those shiny stars, sir -- you take care over there! ;) ;) Yvette ;)
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Oh this is so true for a lot of couples. I'm glad that it does not relate to you.
You have created some humour here. Nice! I like the rhymes and the conversational flow of this poem. :)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Oh this is so true for a lot of couples. I'm glad that it does not relate to you.
You have created some humour here. Nice! I like the rhymes and the conversational flow of this poem. :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thanx for dropping by today, Sandra -- so glad that you enjoyed my 'non-romantic' V-Day offering! ;) ;) Be sure to stop by any time - contest not required! ;) ;) Have a wonderful week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Suzie Q
Well done! Love the humor in this. Great photo to start it off. Couldn't help but think of the song by Connie Francis. It flowed well with perfect rhyme. I especially liked " Shot through a quite reluctant heart, this arrow plainly missed it's mark" Great job! Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Well done! Love the humor in this. Great photo to start it off. Couldn't help but think of the song by Connie Francis. It flowed well with perfect rhyme. I especially liked " Shot through a quite reluctant heart, this arrow plainly missed it's mark" Great job! Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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So very glad you enjoyed this one, Suzie Q -- had a lot of fun putting it to paper! ;) :) Thanx for dropping by today -- be sure to stop in more often, contest writes or not...would love to see ya 'round the place! :) :) Take good care this week! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha! It's true, indeed. Opposites do attract, and funny you should hit on this idea--I think we have a fair bit in common, you and I. (This was my valentine poem idea one year too. LOL) I LOVE yours. Well done! Especially, "...hawk and dove" -- I see it! *Huge smile* Enjoyed very much!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Hahahaha! It's true, indeed. Opposites do attract, and funny you should hit on this idea--I think we have a fair bit in common, you and I. (This was my valentine poem idea one year too. LOL) I LOVE yours. Well done! Especially, "...hawk and dove" -- I see it! *Huge smile* Enjoyed very much!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my 'non-romantic' Valentine's Day write -- it was fun trying to be all mushy without the mush - LOL!! ;) :) Take care up there, O Lady of the North! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from James W. Reynolds
This is a fun Valentine's poem with a great conclusion. I really like how smoothly it flows, especially for an acrostic poem. Finally I like how you have sprinkled near rhymes throughout. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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This is a fun Valentine's poem with a great conclusion. I really like how smoothly it flows, especially for an acrostic poem. Finally I like how you have sprinkled near rhymes throughout. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for stopping in for the read and review, James -- and glad that you enjoyed this 'non-romantic' V-Day offering! ;) ;) Have a wonderful remainder of the weekend! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Christine C Autry
I enjoyed your palm it was very good. I enjoyed the way you created it and the picture to it was very nice thank you. Keep up the good work I appreciate it.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed your palm it was very good. I enjoyed the way you created it and the picture to it was very nice thank you. Keep up the good work I appreciate it.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I'm so glad you enjoyed the palm...although I'm hoping you meant the poem ...LOL! ;) Gotta love those hi-tech autocorrects, yeah? ;) LOL! Thanx for the review, Christine -- good to hear from you! ;) Y. M.
Comment from meeshu
the perfect V-Day card. Cyndy insists on saying Valentimes. she thinks it's cute. please tell her it is annoying. really love the way the last line fits. excellent, MD..................PD&C
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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the perfect V-Day card. Cyndy insists on saying Valentimes. she thinks it's cute. please tell her it is annoying. really love the way the last line fits. excellent, MD..................PD&C
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for the Valentimes comments, dude -- and, no, I will not tell her it's annoying....cuz you're supposed to say it's your lovely wife's unique way of looking at the world!! ;) ;) Goodness knows we have more than enough 'mushiness' out there for V-Day....which is a good reason for my write here! ;) ;) You two take care of each other out there and have a great weekend! :) MD
Comment from l.raven
HI Yvette, this reminds me of my mom and dad...they were like night and day from the day they met...he was a poor redneck...and she was from money....everyone said it would last....63 years later they were still laughing...and there were times I would wonder how they ever got married...but I know one thing...if I know anything...they had a true love for each other like know other...sadly Dec.14th...a year and a half ago pop died....he was 89...and mom is 89 now...so you have a long way to go sweet girl...a wonderful journey ahead...I love your poem my sweet friend...and smile at your picture...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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HI Yvette, this reminds me of my mom and dad...they were like night and day from the day they met...he was a poor redneck...and she was from money....everyone said it would last....63 years later they were still laughing...and there were times I would wonder how they ever got married...but I know one thing...if I know anything...they had a true love for each other like know other...sadly Dec.14th...a year and a half ago pop died....he was 89...and mom is 89 now...so you have a long way to go sweet girl...a wonderful journey ahead...I love your poem my sweet friend...and smile at your picture...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Opposites definitely attract, Linda - to that I can testify....and, probably just like your parents, let's just say there's never a dull moment 'round here! ;) ;) And I look forward to many more -- thank you so much for that awesome vision....I'm so glad you had your parents! ;) ;) Thanx so much for your review and your wonderful comments, ma'am - and I'm glad you enjoyed, ma'am! ;) ;) And if my picture made you smile, I'm so glad -- it's one I had my son snap for me last Spring when I joined FS -- you got the 'after school' me - LOL!!! :) Here's wishing you an awesome weekend! ;) ;) Yvette :)
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you are so very welcome sweet girl...and I wish you many years of happiness...and you have an awesome weekend as well...much love...Linda xxoo
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a sweet and humorous Valentine to remind us that some love matches occur because opposites do attract--hawk/dove. :)
Your title, "Stupid Cupid" brings a sense of humor to your delightful poem! What a great tribute to your husband of thirty years (that's worth celebrating).
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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What a sweet and humorous Valentine to remind us that some love matches occur because opposites do attract--hawk/dove. :)
Your title, "Stupid Cupid" brings a sense of humor to your delightful poem! What a great tribute to your husband of thirty years (that's worth celebrating).
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Opposites definitely attract - to that I can testify....let's just say there's never a dull moment 'round here! ;) ;) Thanx so much for your review and your wonderful comments, Cindy - so glad you enjoyed, ma'am! ;) ;) Here's wishing you an awesome weekend! ;) ;) Yvette :)
