Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Jen, well done on this verse. The poignancy of the message grabs the attention of the reader and keeps it. The presentation and content are well presented and vibrant. Well done and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Many thanks

Comment from Rhonda Skinner

Excellent

I can see how erasing the words doesn't erase the ignorance and hatred that brought them to be. This poem carries a powerful message. Well done. Good luck in the voting.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Thanks for the great review Rhonda. Jen.

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Good morning to you, Jenintorre

Your free verse poem is a real sticker. Clever and well worth the read and reminder of the divide between man and man. A crazy lot we are.

kind regards

trimple



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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019

Good morning to you Trimple. Thanks for the great review. Jen.