Christian By Day
Metaphorical 5-7-5 for contest16 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
How very true! Princes may fall in love with angels before midnight and will sometimes dance half the night away - but it's only after midnight that they really set fire to your feathers!
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How very true! Princes may fall in love with angels before midnight and will sometimes dance half the night away - but it's only after midnight that they really set fire to your feathers!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Tony. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from djsaxon
Almost a dark vampiric moment. Evocative and subtle, inviting us to think about the succinct (by definition) statement. Good luck in the comp and thank you for sharing - DJ
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Almost a dark vampiric moment. Evocative and subtle, inviting us to think about the succinct (by definition) statement. Good luck in the comp and thank you for sharing - DJ
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, DJ.
Comment from royowen
A very good and beautifully worded 5/7/5 poetry entry in this contest. It is very eloquent and unusually wonderfully expressed, the tought brings great imagery. Good luck in the contest, well done, blessings, Roy
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A very good and beautifully worded 5/7/5 poetry entry in this contest. It is very eloquent and unusually wonderfully expressed, the tought brings great imagery. Good luck in the contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Roy. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from Melissa Heilig
I could completely relate to this. I interpreted it based on my own experiences of feeling like two different people at work and at home. I love the simplicity of the meaning.
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I could completely relate to this. I interpreted it based on my own experiences of feeling like two different people at work and at home. I love the simplicity of the meaning.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Melissa. Yes, I'm sure most people have two different sides. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Christine C Autry
Very good. I enjoyed your poem. Yes this might happen more than you think. Great picture too. Thanks for sharing your work. You have good talent.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Very good. I enjoyed your poem. Yes this might happen more than you think. Great picture too. Thanks for sharing your work. You have good talent.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Christine. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
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You are Welcome.
Comment from moonsunrise
I enjoyed reading this 5-7-5 poem. The visual puzzled me a little. I wondered why her wings caught fire after midnight. I might be missing something.
Thanks for sharing.
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I enjoyed reading this 5-7-5 poem. The visual puzzled me a little. I wondered why her wings caught fire after midnight. I might be missing something.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review, Moon. What's it's meaning is she plays the Christian during the day but once night comes along she tends to lean toward her sinner side. It just happened to be the contest wants something that's after midnight.. Hope that cleared it up a little.
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Yes it did. Thanks so much. Great poem.