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Our Friend Michael Cahill

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Prose or Poetry

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Comment from nancy_e_davis
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This is another nice tribute to Mikey Dean. He was a special person we all agree on that. His poetry and prose will live on here on FanStory. I love that picture of Jesus. Wonder how they do all that? Exceptional!
Nancy:)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019

Comment from Pantygynt
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I thought I had reviewed this already. I suppose it has cropped up again because it is in the book now. i am pleased that you got it in there as it is a fitting tribute to Michael. I see that the one issue I had that we discussed in class - the pronunciation of toward is no longer an issue with this slightly altered version.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    I guess when I edited it and placed it in Yvonne's book it showed up twice, Jim.
    I am glad that I was able to get it in there.
    Thanks as always for your comments.
    ~Dean
reply by Pantygynt on 06-Feb-2019
    It paid me twice :))
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Yes, I also had to re-promote it as well. Or, just leave it at two cents which in that case no one would have bothered to read it, I'm sure. :)
reply by Pantygynt on 06-Feb-2019
    How strange. I am sure I have moved stuff into a book without all that.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    I dunno, I'd never done it before.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dean,

I feel like this is the same poem I have already reviewed...? Is this simply moved over to the book or something? Or have I lost my mind -- again? hahaha

As usual, your words are smooth and soothing and say what we all want to say. I enjoyed!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    No, you haven't lost your mind, Roco, lol.
    I guess when I edited it slightly and placed it in Yvonne's tribute book for Michael it showed up twice.
    Oh well.
    Thanks for commenting on it again.
    ~Dean :)
Comment from jenintorre
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This is a wonderful, heartfelt tribute to Michael. I really admired him so much. A great writer.Thanks for this, i think we are all in shock. God bless. Jen. X

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thanks for reading!
Comment from LIJ Red
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Excellent poem and commemorative post for a gentleman who was a helping hand to so many Fanstorians. We write a lot of poems about the Reaper, but we are never ready when he comes...

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    We had better be, Red.
    I am.
    Thanks for reading.
    ~Dean
Comment from Teri7
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Dean, This is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem you have penned about Michael. He was a very sweet and nice guy that was very smart and helpful too. We will miss him, but thankful he is in a better place now. I am thankful you are my friend too Dean! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Blessings, Teresa.
    Thanks for reading.
Comment from Sasha
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I thought I reviewed this one already, but it has been a long day and I very well could just be imagining that. Beautiful tribute to a dear and talented friend. He will be missed by many of us.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    No, you didn't imagine it, Sasha.
    I neglected to place it in Yvonne's book of tribute poetry to our dear friend, Michael.
    Thanks so much again. I appreciate your kind comments just as I did the first time.
    ~Dean
Comment from Artasylum
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Being new I didn't have a chance to know his work and well look him up to read and like you I know he is scribing his crossing into the veil of life's inevitable resting place... Lovely... yours, diana

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thanks so much for reading and for the generous six stars as well, Diana.
    Michael was truly one of the "good guys."
    I wish you had gotten to know him as I did.
    I deeply appreciate your review.
    ~Dean
Comment from BOO ghost
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This is pretty awesome! Nice job on everything. Maybe he is with Jesus right now. He is not suffering.

Presentation looks fabulous! Yep. Your writing. I know I have cried. Remember all the good times us three had together.

He is looking at us. Spirits have no boundaries.

Mikey would smile.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thanks, Boo. That means a lot coming from you. You Boo Ghost), Michael (the Lion) and me (professor Poe) were like the Three Musketeers here for quite a while, weren't we?
    I know you will miss him just as much as I will.
    Thanks for the thoughtful comments and the generous six stars.
    All are deeply appreciated.
    ~Spooky
reply by BOO ghost on 06-Feb-2019
    Yep. We were the three musketeers or the three stooges. Hope you been feeling OK. We got sine wicked storms rolling down here Thursday. Who knows, I may stick around a month.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Yeah, we're gonna get some severe storms ourselves.
    I hope you're able to stick around, Boo.
    I miss ya around here.
    Make No Bones About It... photo signature_23_zps2e3uz4ir.gif
reply by BOO ghost on 06-Feb-2019
    Well, if I get that writing spell, I may linger around a while. Afraid to leave again. Somebody else may die. I saw you posted twice for Mikey. That is super cool! We will get strong winds. Cold front is behind it. Take care, Spooky!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    You too, Boo.
reply by BOO ghost on 06-Feb-2019
    Like I said, afraid to leave. Hate to be gone and somebody else gives up the ghost.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Dean
How nice of you write and say very nice things about Michael Cahill one of our fanstorians. I never read any of his writing. Gert

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thanks for reading!
reply by Gert sherwood on 06-Feb-2019
    You are always welcome Gert