Above the Widowing Peaks
5-7-5 poem11 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
well, I'd like to ask you about this. Your poem is beautiful and it peaks my interest - no pun intended. well, okay pun intended,
BUT Are there widowing peaks?
I love your "mourning clouds." Very good!
Katharine - pome lover
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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well, I'd like to ask you about this. Your poem is beautiful and it peaks my interest - no pun intended. well, okay pun intended,
BUT Are there widowing peaks?
I love your "mourning clouds." Very good!
Katharine - pome lover
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Thanks for your positive response to my poem.
About the widowing peaks: There are wonderful peaks in Southern New Zealand where I live, and too many mountaineers get killed... so yes. there are widows left to mourn the loss.
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well, that's too bad. I guess people are going to try, regardless.