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Our Friend Michael Cahill

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Comment from F. Wehr3
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Very heartfelt tribute, Gloria. Michael always had that contagious enthusiasm and positivity. I found it hard not to smile when reading him,even if it was just a suggestion in the forum. He'll be missed. Hope all well with you.

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thank you so very much Russell. So right you are about his contagious enthusiasm. Always appreciation :))

    Gloria
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Gloria, this is a heartfelt tribute to a fellow writer on this site. Mike was special with his wonderful sense of humour and always open to give you his support and ideas. I know you've lost a good friend. He touched so many of us. Warm regards. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much Ulla for a beautiful review. :))

    Gloria
Comment from LIJ Red
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You know how I quote books and movies, maybe a bit like Mikey, but the one rocking horse I recall was Golden Dancer from Inherit The Wind...excellent post, Gloria. Well said.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    I love movie quotes if I recognize them, but otherwise, they just whizz right on by. Thanks a bunch always Ellijay. :))

    Gloria
Comment from catch22
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Hi G, this is a beautiful tribute to Michael and I think you captured his good natured quirkiness in the write. The writing is heartfelt and nostalgic. I still can't believe he is gone. It seems surreal to me...I am so sorry.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much Pam. Yep he had a real humorous side to him that I much enjoyed. Always appreciation :))

    Gloria
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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Hi Gloria,
I wish I would have saved a six but almost everyone who wrote something that the first day, well I gave em all out. This was a beautiful and sentimental journey for both of you and I can see that you spent quite a bit of creative energy putting this out in the universe for Mike. I think it is very cool that you knew him very well. I knew him as a coach, both technical and creative, but not on the level that you did. I will say I respected him greatly. He helped me immensely. It has taken me a few days to regain my composure enough to read more. I think there will be a huge hole in Fan Story with his absence for sure. You really presented a beautiful poem and remembrance for and of him. I want to do a Threnody for him and I have been giving a lot of thought about what I want to add to the book. I am wondering if you knew what age he was turning a few weeks ago. I wanted to work it into what I have to say. I didn't think he was much older than me in chronological years, I just wanted to know the number to see if will work in a way of the rhyme - if not I understand. I thought we discussed it at one point, but my memory is so bad I cannot locate the message. I also want to use the nice Facebook photo and I am wondering if you think anyone would mind? Since you seem to have been the closest to him that I can tell. I thought I would check with you first. Any info you want to share would be great. I can even message you before I send with a mock-up as an embedded picture to see if you are okay with how I want to do it. Just let me know when you can. I have two projects taken front row tomorrow during the day and on Wednesday but by Thursday I should be ready to put something together or even late tomorrow night. I am in the Eastern time zone. So any input at all would be helpful. And again this is a stunning poem and entry tribute to Mike. Very beautiful! Fonda

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    What a sweet idea you have planned for your contribution to Mike's memorial tribute. I'm not sure his exact age, sixty something, so if you can make that number work in that would be awesome. In my opinion it's never a good idea to use a photograph without first obtaining permission from the person, so maybe if you can find a likeness or some piece of art that reminds you of Mike that is the best thing to do. I find sometimes abstract works well in these situations. I am excited to read what you do with your piece and I'm sure you will do a terrific job. Hope this helps and thank you so much Fonda for a beautiful review. :))

    Gloria
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Thanks for doing this, Gloria. This took time and talent. I honestly woke up today hoping that you would post a poem to read. I feel like my newborn skills are getting rusty without your daily influence. I wasn't expecting this, but I am so glad that I read it.
You take care. It is hard to lose a special friend.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much Debbie. I will be writing a few poems this year, just not at the pace of last year. lol. Your newborn skills are terrific. Always appreciate you. :))

    Gloria
reply by Debbie Pope on 05-Feb-2019
    You deserve a rest for sure. How are you passing all that spare time?
Comment from BOO ghost
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Very nice tribute to Sir Mikey Cahill. AKA, the Lion King.

You know him to perfection. Somehow, I think Mikey knows what we write. He no longer has a body to contain his soul. He is a spirit. A ghost-like me and a spirit can manifest anywhere because he is like a light.

I would give a dozen stars for this tribute, if possible. It is hard to write words for a passed loved one. Don't seem words can justify human or ghost emotions.

We must finish Mikey's unfinished book. Maybe I will add something tomorrow. This is heartfelt. There is only one Mikey.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much BOO for a wonderful review. Yes Mike will be missed terribly and by all means his unfinished book must be finished. You have to point me to where that is, because I'm not familiar with it. Always appreciate you friend BOO. :))

    Gloria
reply by BOO ghost on 05-Feb-2019
    We are writing his unfinished book I will add a chapter tomorrow.
Comment from Just2Write
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Oh, Gloria - I nearly missed this tribute and the notice on the front page of Fan Story. The news was like a kick in the guts to me. I didn't really know Michael well but I often read his reviews to others and felt that in many ways I knew him more than I though I did.
He was always so supportive of those he was mentoring And those he loved. He was charitable and kind.
I often wished I could write reviews like the ones he did. Your tribute to him was beautifully written my dear and I can feel your sense of loss in your words. I have been ill, as you know, so I have been away from FS quite a bit. I can't seem to get my muse on track. Anyway, I send you big hugs and condolences. I know that Michael was more than just a fellow writer at FS for you.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much Heather for a terrific review. It came as quite a surprise, but I guess these things often do. I'm glad to hear you are feeling better and are getting your muse back into shape, because you are always missed in these parts. Much appreciation to you always my friend. :)

    Gloria
reply by Just2Write on 06-Feb-2019
Comment from Mastery
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Wonderful eulogy of sorts for our friend, Michael, Gloria. You were evidently much closer to him than many of us. Perhaps that is because you were consistently writing poetry. I rarely do anymore. I like the way you told this to all of us. Well done. Bless you, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much Bob. Always great to hear from you. :))

    Gloria
Comment from strandregs
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Sad to say , I missed him, missed the opportunity to get to know him.
Your words give respect and love and convey his unique style.
it is an honourable goodbye in your unique style.
And I dare not bring my unique style. :-))Z.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    HAHA. Oh come on now, Z this is no time for modesty. Bring your unique style. Much appreciation to you always. :))

    Gloria