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It feels so good15 total reviews
Comment from Lady Jane
Fun entry, writer. Nothing here not to like. The image was excellent and the perfect symbol to elevate your write. Your syllable count was on point. The concept of winter sunbeams was a glorious one. The entire presentation here is penned flawlessly and skill. Did you hear we are to have an early spring? Yay!!!
Great job and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Fun entry, writer. Nothing here not to like. The image was excellent and the perfect symbol to elevate your write. Your syllable count was on point. The concept of winter sunbeams was a glorious one. The entire presentation here is penned flawlessly and skill. Did you hear we are to have an early spring? Yay!!!
Great job and good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Janelle. I am so glad that you liked my poem. Unfortunately, in Birmingham, our groundhog says 6 more weeks of winter. Maybe we will get a few rays of winter sunshine.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Such an adorable dog really calls attention to your verse. Feeling the sun in your face makes any day seem better. A lovely little gem that pleases the senses and makes the muse smile. I really enjoyed this and wish you the best in the competition!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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Such an adorable dog really calls attention to your verse. Feeling the sun in your face makes any day seem better. A lovely little gem that pleases the senses and makes the muse smile. I really enjoyed this and wish you the best in the competition!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
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What a nicely written review. You made me smile. Thank you.
Comment from Libby Geisinger
A lovely 5-7-5 poem! I love the first line, especially "winter sunbeams" because it is easy to forget that there can be warmth in the coldest of times. I also love the picture which compliments the poem quite well. Great job and good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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A lovely 5-7-5 poem! I love the first line, especially "winter sunbeams" because it is easy to forget that there can be warmth in the coldest of times. I also love the picture which compliments the poem quite well. Great job and good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you for enjoying my poem. The little dog makes me smile. I thought that I would share.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Thanks for this writing prompt entry. It is my favored style.
Picture is a great match for your words.
sunbeams soothe is a great alliterative phrase
middle line very expressive
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thanks for this writing prompt entry. It is my favored style.
Picture is a great match for your words.
sunbeams soothe is a great alliterative phrase
middle line very expressive
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Mark. It's honestly my favorite style as well. The longer poems are beautiful, but I like the succinct ones that say a lot in a few words. I am glad that you like my poem.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This was a delightful 5-7-5 creation. It conjured up a lovely image in my mind, and then I looked at the picture and liked it even more. Nice job.
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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This was a delightful 5-7-5 creation. It conjured up a lovely image in my mind, and then I looked at the picture and liked it even more. Nice job.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Rachelle. What a nice review. Can't you just see that dog enjoying the sun on his face?
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Absolutely!!