Would You Believe...?
A librarian is faced with a startling revelation...26 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Very well done entry here, Yvette. You leave a lot to the imagination of the reader but the story still is concrete. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Bless you, Bob
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Very well done entry here, Yvette. You leave a lot to the imagination of the reader but the story still is concrete. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Bless you, Bob
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review, Bob - much appreciated. :) Yvette
Comment from Lulube
A great, short-mystery, to question the readers imagination. The chuckle is the set up for something to come. The simple pile left outside the door, was totally for the librarian's comment to him. She got his first Halloween treat, you might say.
lulube
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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A great, short-mystery, to question the readers imagination. The chuckle is the set up for something to come. The simple pile left outside the door, was totally for the librarian's comment to him. She got his first Halloween treat, you might say.
lulube
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, lulube, and especially for the smile -- I definitely had some fun with this one! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from patcelaw
This is a good entry for the contest and I wish you the best. How many times in life do we wish to be noticed, yet are not because we are hiding behind a mask? Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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This is a good entry for the contest and I wish you the best. How many times in life do we wish to be noticed, yet are not because we are hiding behind a mask? Patricia
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx so very much for your review, Patricia -- always much appreciated! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sugarray77
This is adorable, Yvette, and a wonderful entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction. I think all of us got a chuckle out of this scenario. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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This is adorable, Yvette, and a wonderful entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction. I think all of us got a chuckle out of this scenario. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, Melissa, and I'm glad you found the smile hidden here -- I definitely had some fun with this one! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Yvette,
What a delightful little story you've penned here! I love the idea of there being a 'new' Invisible Man running around - especially on Halloween. You have done an outstanding job with the limited word count.
Wishing you all the best in the contest,
~MP~
(just wish I had a six left for you)
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Hi, Yvette,
What a delightful little story you've penned here! I love the idea of there being a 'new' Invisible Man running around - especially on Halloween. You have done an outstanding job with the limited word count.
Wishing you all the best in the contest,
~MP~
(just wish I had a six left for you)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, MP, always appreciate your stopping by -- I definitely had some fun with this one! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile Yvette, an inventive write and I used to love that story when I was younger! A great advertisement for the book too! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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He he he, this made me smile Yvette, an inventive write and I used to love that story when I was younger! A great advertisement for the book too! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, Dolly, and especially for the smile -- I definitely had some fun with this one! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
That would be an absolute shock. A most imaginative post, and, as usual you display ypur incomparable ability with words, a great little post, well done, Yvette, good job,blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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That would be an absolute shock. A most imaginative post, and, as usual you display ypur incomparable ability with words, a great little post, well done, Yvette, good job,blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx so much for the encouraging review, Roy -- I really just had some fun with this one! :) ;) Glad you enjoyed! :) Yvette
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Well done
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Oh boy, another winner - I'm certain of it! This made me laugh - good thing it was Halloween. It could have been April Fool's that would have been funny too! How did you find the image? Amazing! I am giggling right now. Okay beautiful Teacher, good luck in the contest. You really don't need it - but good luck. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Oh boy, another winner - I'm certain of it! This made me laugh - good thing it was Halloween. It could have been April Fool's that would have been funny too! How did you find the image? Amazing! I am giggling right now. Okay beautiful Teacher, good luck in the contest. You really don't need it - but good luck. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Oh, I'm so glad it made you smile, Fonda -- it was certainly a fun one to put together....oh, and Google images, of course. :) ;) Thanx so much for stopping by with your enthusiasm today -- can't tell you how much it was needed! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Hi Yvette! That was fun... fifty words that just look so effortless! How do you do that? And a perfect picture! Where ever do you come up with these things??? LOL
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Hi Yvette! That was fun... fifty words that just look so effortless! How do you do that? And a perfect picture! Where ever do you come up with these things??? LOL
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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She's just a crazy blonde down here in the South! ;) ;) LOL! :) Thanx for stopping by with a smile, Susan! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifty-word dribble flash fiction about the library visitor that seems to be strange in many ways, but when his clothes are found outside the door neatly stacked, my neck hairs start to rise.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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A very well-written fifty-word dribble flash fiction about the library visitor that seems to be strange in many ways, but when his clothes are found outside the door neatly stacked, my neck hairs start to rise.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the quick read and review, Sandra -- this one was just for fun! :) :) Yvette