Perennials of War
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Comment from Artasylum
I love your slice of life character development... it really makes the story flow properly and brings the characters to life... thanks so much for your wonderful musing and looking forward...
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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I love your slice of life character development... it really makes the story flow properly and brings the characters to life... thanks so much for your wonderful musing and looking forward...
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
I could not let this book end without at least dropping in for one chapter, and Barbara, I am so glad I did. You have mastered this conclusion so well, I now want to read the whole book! I still can't, but maybe I can get a copy when you publish!
Just one thing I want you to consider -- is it long enough? I ask because my first one STILL isn't. Some day I will actually get back to it. LOL.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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I could not let this book end without at least dropping in for one chapter, and Barbara, I am so glad I did. You have mastered this conclusion so well, I now want to read the whole book! I still can't, but maybe I can get a copy when you publish!
Just one thing I want you to consider -- is it long enough? I ask because my first one STILL isn't. Some day I will actually get back to it. LOL.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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It is long enough. It's about the same length as my others. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh, good! It was my pleasure. I'm only sorry I couldn't follow!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Just like that? Ben winked and said it was okay with him? All that time he was okay with it? Or did Drew gradually win him over? He was a good dad who put his daughter's happiness first. That's a sweet ending, one I didn't expect.
Did Shana get the painting? She said she didn't want it, but she does own it, so who else would get it? Unless she donated it to a museum?
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Just like that? Ben winked and said it was okay with him? All that time he was okay with it? Or did Drew gradually win him over? He was a good dad who put his daughter's happiness first. That's a sweet ending, one I didn't expect.
Did Shana get the painting? She said she didn't want it, but she does own it, so who else would get it? Unless she donated it to a museum?
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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She will get the painting a few posts ago, after it's used as evidence. In last weeks posts, I mentioned Drew was going to call Benjamin. I am wondering what happened. LOL
Comment from TheStoryMan
What a wonderful conclusion! Love doesn't care about money, religion or anything else. Love only cares about love. In the grand scheme of things nothing else matters. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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What a wonderful conclusion! Love doesn't care about money, religion or anything else. Love only cares about love. In the grand scheme of things nothing else matters. This is very well written.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome
Comment from giraffmang
And there it is. An enjoyable tale well told. nice to have a happy ending. I must write one some day... lol
There's also Drew's life style. - lifestyle can be a single word here.
"Now, comes the difficult one.- don't think you need the comma here.
I didn't understand what I was putting you through for that I'm sorry." - should probably have some kind of punctuation after through. A comma or dahs perhaps.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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And there it is. An enjoyable tale well told. nice to have a happy ending. I must write one some day... lol
There's also Drew's life style. - lifestyle can be a single word here.
"Now, comes the difficult one.- don't think you need the comma here.
I didn't understand what I was putting you through for that I'm sorry." - should probably have some kind of punctuation after through. A comma or dahs perhaps.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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As usual, I appreciate your help. I have made the corrections. I'll be starting, sort of, my new novel. It' will only be the highlights.
Comment from Rhonda Skinner
Bravo. Congratulations on finishing your book. If I may ask, I have one question. Has Shana's age come up in previous chapters? Just wondering because you have her as 25 in the character list and 23 in this last chapter.
Otherwise everything looked great and I do love a happy ending.Cheers, Rhonda
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Bravo. Congratulations on finishing your book. If I may ask, I have one question. Has Shana's age come up in previous chapters? Just wondering because you have her as 25 in the character list and 23 in this last chapter.
Otherwise everything looked great and I do love a happy ending.Cheers, Rhonda
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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It never has before and I realized yesterday, I guess yesterday that I had the wrong age in the character list. It work up at 2:30 this morning. Thank you.
Comment from Teresa Alford
I believe I have missed some of these chapters in your story. I will have to find time to catch up. You story is interesting. Good job. I love the song. Very moving. TA. ";-)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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I believe I have missed some of these chapters in your story. I will have to find time to catch up. You story is interesting. Good job. I love the song. Very moving. TA. ";-)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Barbara, so they got each other in the end. How lovely is that. Finally all the rest of them came to their senses. Even Shana's parents. Well done. I loved the scene with the dog taking her clothes out of her suitcase. Now looking forward to your new story. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Awe, Barbara, so they got each other in the end. How lovely is that. Finally all the rest of them came to their senses. Even Shana's parents. Well done. I loved the scene with the dog taking her clothes out of her suitcase. Now looking forward to your new story. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the encouraging review and your generous support.
Comment from Ben Colder
Wow! I am glad to have read the ending. Love the way you twisted this from fear into love. Perfect ending. Well done Barbara. So sorry to have missed so much but off site for a few weeks. Thank you for your prayers and support over the years. My blessings to you. In this story, Love covers a multitude of mistakes. Well done writer.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Wow! I am glad to have read the ending. Love the way you twisted this from fear into love. Perfect ending. Well done Barbara. So sorry to have missed so much but off site for a few weeks. Thank you for your prayers and support over the years. My blessings to you. In this story, Love covers a multitude of mistakes. Well done writer.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Yes, it does. I happen to believe that true God centered love can solve a multitude of problems. My prayers continue to be said for you. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
This is definitely 6 star material and I just love the smooth way you ended this. I enjoyed this story fro the beginning and think you did superb job with it. Thanks so much for putting your awesome imagination to such good work. I look forward to your next project.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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This is definitely 6 star material and I just love the smooth way you ended this. I enjoyed this story fro the beginning and think you did superb job with it. Thanks so much for putting your awesome imagination to such good work. I look forward to your next project.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the generous support.