Fairy Crown
flower 5-7-525 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Fairy Crown is a sweet 5/7/5 poem for the 5/7/5 flower writing prompt.
I enjoyed reading each line and I wish you well in the contest.
well done.
blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Fairy Crown is a sweet 5/7/5 poem for the 5/7/5 flower writing prompt.
I enjoyed reading each line and I wish you well in the contest.
well done.
blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, Janet. Thank you for sharing your kind response.
Comment from meeshu
this very short poem is delightful. and the little girl, precious. You have done a fine job with this 5-7-5 flower poetry contest entry. good luck to you..
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this very short poem is delightful. and the little girl, precious. You have done a fine job with this 5-7-5 flower poetry contest entry. good luck to you..
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, meeshu. Thank you for sharing your kind response.
Comment from William Ross
A good 5 7 5 on the flower girl and crown of roses. it works out like a haiku the way it's written. should do well, Good luck on the contest and have a great day
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A good 5 7 5 on the flower girl and crown of roses. it works out like a haiku the way it's written. should do well, Good luck on the contest and have a great day
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
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I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and write a review for my poem, William. Thamk you for sharing your thoughts and comments.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is definitely a decisively different take on the 5-7-5 flower prompt, Anonymous Poet.
While the majority of the ones I've read so far deal with just one type of flower, yours incorporated a cute little child and a crown of roses into the mix.
She had better watch those thorns, however.
There was another famous person in human history who wore a crown of thorns as well, I think.
H-m-m-mmm... I can't quite place him--a carpenter, I believe.
Oh well, I'll remember eventually, I'm sure.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :-)))
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This is definitely a decisively different take on the 5-7-5 flower prompt, Anonymous Poet.
While the majority of the ones I've read so far deal with just one type of flower, yours incorporated a cute little child and a crown of roses into the mix.
She had better watch those thorns, however.
There was another famous person in human history who wore a crown of thorns as well, I think.
H-m-m-mmm... I can't quite place him--a carpenter, I believe.
Oh well, I'll remember eventually, I'm sure.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :-)))
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thanks for your review and comments, Dean. No thorns in the little girl's head...would make for a tragic wedding. I appreciate your feedback.
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Anytime...
Comment from Kelly Grim
This is such a sweet poem... perfect pic and perfect poetry... "fairy crown" is such a sweet name for her floral headpiece... love the last line! Well done. Good luck in the contest!
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This is such a sweet poem... perfect pic and perfect poetry... "fairy crown" is such a sweet name for her floral headpiece... love the last line! Well done. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, Kelly. Thank you for sharing your kind response.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of every syllable in this sweet 5-7-5. Even
without the artwork, which is really lovely, I could visual a little "princess"
with flowers in her hair.
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You have made effective use of every syllable in this sweet 5-7-5. Even
without the artwork, which is really lovely, I could visual a little "princess"
with flowers in her hair.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, Janice. Thank you for sharing your kind response.
Comment from Miss Sherry
What an angel. Such a sweet 5-7-5 for a little darling. You chose so well for your verse. These short gems are a real challenge, but this is one great success. It is unique among the other poems for this contest.
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What an angel. Such a sweet 5-7-5 for a little darling. You chose so well for your verse. These short gems are a real challenge, but this is one great success. It is unique among the other poems for this contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your kind review, Sherry, and thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mystery Poet,
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem today. The flowers look lovely and match the girl's clothes in the picture. You have all the correct syllables in each line, and describe the scene well. I would have liked to see a bit of an aha moment or moment of enlightenment. Just to make this post stand out a bit more from the ordinary. However, it isn't required, so you are fine as is.
Best wishes in the voting booths.
Joy xx
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Hello Mystery Poet,
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem today. The flowers look lovely and match the girl's clothes in the picture. You have all the correct syllables in each line, and describe the scene well. I would have liked to see a bit of an aha moment or moment of enlightenment. Just to make this post stand out a bit more from the ordinary. However, it isn't required, so you are fine as is.
Best wishes in the voting booths.
Joy xx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much, Joy, for your review, comments, and suggestion for my poem. I appreciate hour response and feedback.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Excellent vision depicted in verse and its accompanying illustration. Most little girls in my mind (I have two granddaughters and one daughter) are princesses and they do like to dress up.
Your crowned one is precious.
Good luck in this entry.
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Excellent vision depicted in verse and its accompanying illustration. Most little girls in my mind (I have two granddaughters and one daughter) are princesses and they do like to dress up.
Your crowned one is precious.
Good luck in this entry.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, Mark. Thank you for sharing your kind response.
Comment from Bichon
Lovely poem. You have explained the detail of the flower crown excellently in such few words. The photo is lovely too. Best of luck in the contest with your entry!
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Lovely poem. You have explained the detail of the flower crown excellently in such few words. The photo is lovely too. Best of luck in the contest with your entry!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your time to read and write a review for my poem, Bichon. Thank you for sharing your kind response.