Poems
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Comment from WryWriter
LOL! A most amusing 5-7-5 poetic work. Love the mixed up homophone. The "Po'jize is a hoot! I'd say "Use pelt 'em write," especially the last line. Art choice fits theme way too well. LOL!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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LOL! A most amusing 5-7-5 poetic work. Love the mixed up homophone. The "Po'jize is a hoot! I'd say "Use pelt 'em write," especially the last line. Art choice fits theme way too well. LOL!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thanks again, WW. Kitty tried reading Moby Dick and fell asleep after ?Call me Ish? ...?
Comment from Taylor Monroe
I like this one a lot; it's humorous and really made me laugh. Great job. I look forward to reading more from you. I don't have anything more to say, but this site won't let me submit without writing 150+ characters...
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I like this one a lot; it's humorous and really made me laugh. Great job. I look forward to reading more from you. I don't have anything more to say, but this site won't let me submit without writing 150+ characters...
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Taylor, for giving this a look and an exceptional review. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Everything looks just fine to me, Bill.
Ofcorpse course, you gotta know where I live in order to understand how I could possibly make that claim, heh-heh.
Happy New Year, myfiend friend...
~Dean
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Everything looks just fine to me, Bill.
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Happy New Year, my
~Dean
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Dean. Hope the new year provides grave circumstances and ghoul opportunities.
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You're welcome...:)
Comment from country ranch writer
Write---lol nice work up for your poem one can get confused on many words. It's like a play on words they all sound alike but they are different as night and day.
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Write---lol nice work up for your poem one can get confused on many words. It's like a play on words they all sound alike but they are different as night and day.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks, CRW
Comment from Earl Corp
You're off and running for the new year, you should be one of the highest ranked poets. This was clever word play reversing the two rights and the phonetic pronunciation of apologize. Very nice job.
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You're off and running for the new year, you should be one of the highest ranked poets. This was clever word play reversing the two rights and the phonetic pronunciation of apologize. Very nice job.
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from Teri7
This is another cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned with the crazy writing on it. The imagery you used went well with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
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This is another cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned with the crazy writing on it. The imagery you used went well with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Teri