Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You have accurately defined envy and jealousy main weapons... vicious gossip and vile attacks. I do not think FS is rampant with these type of people... at least I do not remember coming across them... good write.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed your words here and it is rich with jealousy. Few words have great power here and I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

Comment from nordicgirl

Exceptional

Oh he'll yeah, man. I see some of this Crap here. A bunch of crazy jealousy. Wow! You knocked this one right down. The Best so far. Good luck in the contest. NG

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Wow, this is quite a compelling poem. The message is profound and holds much truth. Unfortunately, there are naysayers who look to criticize others because of their (the naysayers) inadequacies.

Great usage of the form. For some reason, the word "them" in the second line reads a little awkward. It could be just me. What do I know?

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018

Yeah ... it's kind of informal and incorrect English. I had it "the", and changed it. If I read it out loud with the right tone, it would probably sound okay. Maybe I'll change it back ... Good point. I'll think about it. :))

Thanks for a great review, thoughts, insights, compliments and all that them there stuff. LOL :))

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

you have created some great images here, and your writing is thoughtful and descriptive, one might even say venomous. but so well targeted..

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018

Glad you found it on point. Yeah ... a little venom, I admit. LOL Thanks a million. :))