Impossible to Hold
Poetry in Under Ten Words Competition Entry12 total reviews
Comment from RodG
This very short poem does describe daydreams very well as "relections [of moments in] time" that are "shimmering just beyond reach." That ephemeral quality they have truly does come through here.
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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This very short poem does describe daydreams very well as "relections [of moments in] time" that are "shimmering just beyond reach." That ephemeral quality they have truly does come through here.
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping by, RS -- so good of you to stop in for the read and review!! ;) :) Here's wishing you wonderful Holiday Daydreams throughout the Season! :)
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You are very welcome. Rod
Comment from Sugarray77
Good job on this short, short verse. Your stunning artwork is very well done and reflects and enhances your verse. Great caption and a great contender in the Under Ten Competition. Good luck.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Good job on this short, short verse. Your stunning artwork is very well done and reflects and enhances your verse. Great caption and a great contender in the Under Ten Competition. Good luck.
Melissa
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping by, Melissa -- so good of you to stop in for the read and review!! ;) :) Here's wishing you wonderful Holiday Daydreams throughout the Season! :)