Soda for Santa
Got no sherry, only soda15 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Aw, this is really cute author, and you even got it to rhyme. Fanta might be the better choice anyway as it's possible Santa is lactose intolerant.
Super job with a most creative entry and I wish you much luck in the booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Aw, this is really cute author, and you even got it to rhyme. Fanta might be the better choice anyway as it's possible Santa is lactose intolerant.
Super job with a most creative entry and I wish you much luck in the booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thaaks for your great teview.
Comment from way2gokevs
A nice piece of work for a competition, lovely art work to compliment your simple words. Lets hope will enjoy his Fanta, Ho, Ho. Best of luck and thanks for sharing and keep writing, you should go far. Cheers, Kev
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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A nice piece of work for a competition, lovely art work to compliment your simple words. Lets hope will enjoy his Fanta, Ho, Ho. Best of luck and thanks for sharing and keep writing, you should go far. Cheers, Kev
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks kev. Glad you like it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-It is in the spirit of the season.
-You have used the words well,
and even include rhyme.
-I think Santa is filled
with good spirit and will
appreciate the Fanta.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-It is in the spirit of the season.
-You have used the words well,
and even include rhyme.
-I think Santa is filled
with good spirit and will
appreciate the Fanta.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks pam. So glad you like it
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You are welcome.
Comment from kahpot
I'm sure he will, what an excellent short poem, showing how the young ones are eager and willing to give as much as receive, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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I'm sure he will, what an excellent short poem, showing how the young ones are eager and willing to give as much as receive, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks Kahpot. So glad you like it.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A clever write.
It is difficult to make in impact in just ten words
Well done.
If Santa was in Australia for Christmas anything cold would be most welcome. Lol.
Blessings
Shirley
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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A clever write.
It is difficult to make in impact in just ten words
Well done.
If Santa was in Australia for Christmas anything cold would be most welcome. Lol.
Blessings
Shirley
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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Thanks Shirley. So glad you like it.