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Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello ... very good writing. All the reasons you love a sunny day, and this was nicely expressed. It is a fun and happy poem and you are not alone. Statistics show that peopleget depressed if it is too dark and cold and rainy, etc. Not me, I love it, lol. Sorry, but give me a rainy day any day. A good book, and a pot of tea and I'm laughing.
I loved the picture you've chosen, suits the poem perfectly. I also like the honesty of the poem. I suppose you are one of those really lucky people that go brown in the sun?? I don't, red and peel. I'm far too white, ehehehehe
have a great day, cheers, Anastasia.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Hello ... very good writing. All the reasons you love a sunny day, and this was nicely expressed. It is a fun and happy poem and you are not alone. Statistics show that peopleget depressed if it is too dark and cold and rainy, etc. Not me, I love it, lol. Sorry, but give me a rainy day any day. A good book, and a pot of tea and I'm laughing.
I loved the picture you've chosen, suits the poem perfectly. I also like the honesty of the poem. I suppose you are one of those really lucky people that go brown in the sun?? I don't, red and peel. I'm far too white, ehehehehe
have a great day, cheers, Anastasia.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Yes I do get brown, Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Happy Sunny Monday", is a well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me, this is certainly a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Happy Sunny Monday", is a well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me, this is certainly a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much for honoring me with a six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Earl Corp, you certainly deserved the six, star rating.
Take care and have a happy, holy and safe Christmas,
the Duchess :))))))
Comment from tfawcus
Nice cheerful rhythm to this romp through the vagaries of the weather by a sun seeker. There's definitely something about old Sol that puts a smile on the face.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Nice cheerful rhythm to this romp through the vagaries of the weather by a sun seeker. There's definitely something about old Sol that puts a smile on the face.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is a really cute poem with a fun rhyme you've penned for the contest.
I do enjoy the sun as well, I'm sure getting tired of living in the snowy north, lol.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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This is a really cute poem with a fun rhyme you've penned for the contest.
I do enjoy the sun as well, I'm sure getting tired of living in the snowy north, lol.
~Kerry
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much Kerry for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from victor 66
Most of my time is spent in Minnesota. But I was once in Florida and while talking to a congenial waiter from this warm state... he informed me, "Yeah, I saw snow once, I didn't like it". His rational for liking warm weather, not as poetic as yours, was still similar. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Most of my time is spent in Minnesota. But I was once in Florida and while talking to a congenial waiter from this warm state... he informed me, "Yeah, I saw snow once, I didn't like it". His rational for liking warm weather, not as poetic as yours, was still similar. Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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You are most welcome, Earl.
Comment from Jaye Bennett
I think you must be as easily amused as I am. My postman brought me one of my best birthday presents -- a new seed catalog -- a sure sign of spring, sunshine and warmth. Even that cloudy/snowy day amuse me no end. I like your poem. It tells of happy times, warm times, sunny days. What's not to like. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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I think you must be as easily amused as I am. My postman brought me one of my best birthday presents -- a new seed catalog -- a sure sign of spring, sunshine and warmth. Even that cloudy/snowy day amuse me no end. I like your poem. It tells of happy times, warm times, sunny days. What's not to like. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from mermaids
I like the sun too, it lifts my mood. Your poetic form is fun to read and I like your theme of wanting to be in the sun. Your use of rhyming words gives a smooth flow of lines and verses. Florida is great, the sun is out quite frequently.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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I like the sun too, it lifts my mood. Your poetic form is fun to read and I like your theme of wanting to be in the sun. Your use of rhyming words gives a smooth flow of lines and verses. Florida is great, the sun is out quite frequently.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Gloria ....
Myself I find Florida a little bit more humid than I prefer, but you know it Canada has extreme temperatures, incredibly hot and incredibly cold and some places too windy too.
A fun poem Earl and a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Myself I find Florida a little bit more humid than I prefer, but you know it Canada has extreme temperatures, incredibly hot and incredibly cold and some places too windy too.
A fun poem Earl and a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thanks Gloria. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Insider98
This is a very happy and fun poem! It flowed so well and it is easy to understand. The sun just brings good mood, doesn't it? It's difficult to be sad when its out. Great job and good luck!
Insider98
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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This is a very happy and fun poem! It flowed so well and it is easy to understand. The sun just brings good mood, doesn't it? It's difficult to be sad when its out. Great job and good luck!
Insider98
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, people do seem to be happier when it is sunny. I like rain too because of the show of the storm and how bright green everything is after. I think your simple rhyme and short lines give it a jaunty feel like kids playing out on a sunny day.
Keep writing
Happy Holidays
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Yes, people do seem to be happier when it is sunny. I like rain too because of the show of the storm and how bright green everything is after. I think your simple rhyme and short lines give it a jaunty feel like kids playing out on a sunny day.
Keep writing
Happy Holidays
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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That's what I was going for. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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No problem.
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