Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Nice one Bill. This is taking keeping up with the Joneses to a whole nuther level. I'd expect the kid to come out with those black frame glasses, a pocket protector and a calculator in hand. All kidding aside this poem rhymed, made sense and was entertaining. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018

Thanks, Earl. My mom must have listened to the Three Stooges for me.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. Great job in this interesting poem. You've described well in poetry form what most parents do nowadays and that is to try to give their new baby a headstart by educating her/him in the womb. Good word choices, flow, rhythm and rhyming. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018

Thanks, Marilyn. Seems like they have to be the winner or first loser.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about babies that come into the world as if they are in charge. They do not hold back and is first in the row for everything. While others seem to need some help.

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2018

Thanks, Sandra. Seems like coming in second is just the first loser.