Cookie storm
a 20 syllable poem about chocolate chips30 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your upbeat tribute to chocolate chip cookies
sounds VERY appealing. The rhyming is an
effective enhancement, and you made good use of
your syllables.
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Your upbeat tribute to chocolate chip cookies
sounds VERY appealing. The rhyming is an
effective enhancement, and you made good use of
your syllables.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This is excellent! The photo made my mouth water by itself, but your words . . . well! Poetical way to cause one to jump off the diet wagon. You did a great job with this contest entry. The overall piece is creative and enticing. Good luck. Chances are great this will get my vote!
Wendy
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This is excellent! The photo made my mouth water by itself, but your words . . . well! Poetical way to cause one to jump off the diet wagon. You did a great job with this contest entry. The overall piece is creative and enticing. Good luck. Chances are great this will get my vote!
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture + words pair nicely. I like the idea of a warm chocolate chip cookie. Good job on the syllable count. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture + words pair nicely. I like the idea of a warm chocolate chip cookie. Good job on the syllable count. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
YUM...this is a tasty little contest of fun. :) I loved your choice of words to explain your cookie celebration. "Tummy by storm," was a charming way to end your poem. I hope you do well in the cookie contest. Good luck! :)
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YUM...this is a tasty little contest of fun. :) I loved your choice of words to explain your cookie celebration. "Tummy by storm," was a charming way to end your poem. I hope you do well in the cookie contest. Good luck! :)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from donette1914
wow those look amazing and i want to go make some lol
it truly is a pleasure to read your work
you really draw ones in
nice chosen words
nice photo and a very chance to win
donette1914 dec 06 2018
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wow those look amazing and i want to go make some lol
it truly is a pleasure to read your work
you really draw ones in
nice chosen words
nice photo and a very chance to win
donette1914 dec 06 2018
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
Just looking at the artwork of your lilting, fun, and joyful poem makes me hungry. There is absolutely nothing that compares to a homemade chocolate chip cookie...Well, at least well-made choc. chip cookies. None could ever compare to my mother's but I have surely tried to mimic hers. Don't know what she did, but they were scrumptious.
Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane
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Hello Mystery Writer,
Just looking at the artwork of your lilting, fun, and joyful poem makes me hungry. There is absolutely nothing that compares to a homemade chocolate chip cookie...Well, at least well-made choc. chip cookies. None could ever compare to my mother's but I have surely tried to mimic hers. Don't know what she did, but they were scrumptious.
Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from Rickie1
Cute, well done, A short and sweet poetry treat for cookie day. Very cleaver. While not earth shattering, saving the world poetry, cookies make people happy like your poem made me smile. Priceless.
Rickie
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Cute, well done, A short and sweet poetry treat for cookie day. Very cleaver. While not earth shattering, saving the world poetry, cookies make people happy like your poem made me smile. Priceless.
Rickie
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
smiles to you author for telling us how your homemade chocolate chip cookie are
Ooey, gooey, yummy, and (when) warm , I agree if you ate too many your tummy would kick up an
ugly storm Gert
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smiles to you author for telling us how your homemade chocolate chip cookie are
Ooey, gooey, yummy, and (when) warm , I agree if you ate too many your tummy would kick up an
ugly storm Gert
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! I could taste the gooey chocolate chip cookies here and that buttery taste in the mouth, I can even smell them too! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Wow! I could taste the gooey chocolate chip cookies here and that buttery taste in the mouth, I can even smell them too! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's word are appetizing, creative and
appealing. The reader got hungry as she read the poem and
looked at the artwork! The artwork compliments this poem well.
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Excellent Poem! The author's word are appetizing, creative and
appealing. The reader got hungry as she read the poem and
looked at the artwork! The artwork compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
