Mommyish Wish
mommyish wish..... a free verse65 total reviews
Comment from Nanny 6
I can sure relate to this poem... LOL, when you got kids to feed and you're the cook and you like your own cooking very much... Seems to add little baggage to the butt doesn't it? LOL this was an enjoyable read, one that I could surly relate to.
Judy
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
I can sure relate to this poem... LOL, when you got kids to feed and you're the cook and you like your own cooking very much... Seems to add little baggage to the butt doesn't it? LOL this was an enjoyable read, one that I could surly relate to.
Judy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Thanks a lot Judy that it made you smile. Thanks for the five stars too. God bless. Susan
Comment from DonandVicki
I am Seventy and have battled my weight throughout my life and just got bigger. I'm at a point now that I just want to enjoy life as I am. Well written. Don and Vicki.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
I am Seventy and have battled my weight throughout my life and just got bigger. I'm at a point now that I just want to enjoy life as I am. Well written. Don and Vicki.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Thanks a lot Don and Vicki for resonating with the message. Thanks for the five stars too. Susan
Comment from Cedar
I enjoyed reading this piece very much because I can fully relate to your words.
I've had a weight problem most of my life and I can't seem to shake it. Thank goodness you are doing very well with yours. Take care...Bill
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
I enjoyed reading this piece very much because I can fully relate to your words.
I've had a weight problem most of my life and I can't seem to shake it. Thank goodness you are doing very well with yours. Take care...Bill
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Thanks a lot Bill for resonating with the message. I change my diet plan to veggies and fruits more and lots of water. it worked for me. God bless. Susan
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, creative and thought provoking.
The poem flows and connects well. The reader thought about her
battle with weight - I am glad my children are grown! The artwork
is perfect and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
The author's words are interesting, creative and thought provoking.
The poem flows and connects well. The reader thought about her
battle with weight - I am glad my children are grown! The artwork
is perfect and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Thanks a lot for resonating with the message of this poem. Thanks too, for the generous five stars. God bless.
Comment from Heather Knight
I'm not sure if this if funny or sad.;)
I'm obsessed with my weight, even though I'm not too heavy, but I still cannot resist sweets.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
I'm not sure if this if funny or sad.;)
I'm obsessed with my weight, even though I'm not too heavy, but I still cannot resist sweets.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Me too, I can't resist sweets, cookies or chocolates. But I finally won my battle with weight. You can too, my friend. God bless.
Comment from l.raven
HI Susan, it is true...that raising kids can tend to keep you holding weight...when they eat...you eat...and when their in school...you snack...LOL...I was never heavy as a kids...but I will go up a few pounds now...and down...I wish my kids were young again...sigh...I love your poem...and love your picture...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
HI Susan, it is true...that raising kids can tend to keep you holding weight...when they eat...you eat...and when their in school...you snack...LOL...I was never heavy as a kids...but I will go up a few pounds now...and down...I wish my kids were young again...sigh...I love your poem...and love your picture...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Thanks a lot Linda for appreciating this little piece. Thank you for resonating with the message and thanks again for the generous five stars. God bless. Susan
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you are sooooo welcome Susan...God Bless you as well...love you...xxoo
Comment from country ranch writer
Weight gain is a pain especially when you have growing kids with a ravenous appetite. It is hard to choose all the good calories.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
Weight gain is a pain especially when you have growing kids with a ravenous appetite. It is hard to choose all the good calories.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot for the five stars and the warm review. Sorry for very late response.
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Comment from krys123
Cheers, Susan;
> while I've been there and that awful up-and-down roller coaster ride with weight, but not anymore. Christmas of 2017 I said I was going to lose enough pounds get to 220 and I weighed 266 at the time and I know way 222.
And staying there...
> It's a rough one in your poetry explains the silliness of it all but sometimes it is very hard for some to lose weight and I feel sorry for them.
> Thanks for sharing, soon, take care and have a good one.
Alx
PS: I'm also 6' 3"
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
Cheers, Susan;
> while I've been there and that awful up-and-down roller coaster ride with weight, but not anymore. Christmas of 2017 I said I was going to lose enough pounds get to 220 and I weighed 266 at the time and I know way 222.
And staying there...
> It's a rough one in your poetry explains the silliness of it all but sometimes it is very hard for some to lose weight and I feel sorry for them.
> Thanks for sharing, soon, take care and have a good one.
Alx
PS: I'm also 6' 3"
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot, Alx for the warm review and for resonating with the message. The mother in the picture is not me though. Sorry for my very late reply.
Comment from Rickie1
NASSUS
When you are committed to others it is difficult to tend to yourself. There is little energy left for that. Eating is comforting. You do the best you can with what you got and can't feel bad for doing anything but that. Good poem.
Rickie
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
NASSUS
When you are committed to others it is difficult to tend to yourself. There is little energy left for that. Eating is comforting. You do the best you can with what you got and can't feel bad for doing anything but that. Good poem.
Rickie
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot for the five-star review. Sorry for my late reply.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, nassus1957.
-I appreciate your author note;
kudos to you for conquering
your battle with weight.
-I like your poem.
-It is very honest in the
first two lines.
-You give good examples of
what gets in the way of that dream.
-The last three lines make
a very good conclusion.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
-Very nice image and
presentation, nassus1957.
-I appreciate your author note;
kudos to you for conquering
your battle with weight.
-I like your poem.
-It is very honest in the
first two lines.
-You give good examples of
what gets in the way of that dream.
-The last three lines make
a very good conclusion.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot for the very warm review. Sorry Pam for my very late reply.
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You are welcome, and not problem about a late reply!