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Comment from judiverse
I was born in the country and grew up there, and I don't know that I'd care to live in the country again. Certainly there's a different kind of learning in the country than what the city provides. Great description of leaving the city--like escaping hell's grasp. Very forceful description. Your syllable count is right-on and your thought is clearly connected. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I was born in the country and grew up there, and I don't know that I'd care to live in the country again. Certainly there's a different kind of learning in the country than what the city provides. Great description of leaving the city--like escaping hell's grasp. Very forceful description. Your syllable count is right-on and your thought is clearly connected. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're very welcome. judi