Cherry Blossom
A Rondeau Potlatch Challenge14 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful Rondeau and I could hear the birds rejoicing and the wonderful smells of spring and the cherry blossoms that please the eye, roll on spring, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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A beautiful Rondeau and I could hear the birds rejoicing and the wonderful smells of spring and the cherry blossoms that please the eye, roll on spring, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Dolly. it's only December and I'm anxious for spring!
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I know what you mean, there was a really cold snap when I was in England last week and I needed my hot water bottle! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment from Pamusart
Hi June. Are you below the equator? Winter is coming on here. What an uplifting poem this is. Here it never gets cold enough to snow. I know that much of the haiku's purpose is just this. To celebrate life. Well done. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Hi June. Are you below the equator? Winter is coming on here. What an uplifting poem this is. Here it never gets cold enough to snow. I know that much of the haiku's purpose is just this. To celebrate life. Well done. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Good to hear from you, Pat. It's winter here also - just daydreaming about spring!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lovely, moving, exuberant poem describes the life that spring brings to the earth and smoothly incorporates the blooming of romance. This is a delightful,
positive piece.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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This lovely, moving, exuberant poem describes the life that spring brings to the earth and smoothly incorporates the blooming of romance. This is a delightful,
positive piece.
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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So glad you dropped by to read and share your sentiments on my Cherry Blossom!
Comment from jmshumate
This is a refreshing poem comparing the newly engaged or married couple to spring. It's a good analogy, and you described spring so well, I see the cherry blossoms and peach blooms in my yard every year and they are so beautiful and refreshing to see. The hope is that the new couple will keep things fresh as long as they live. Thank you for sharing this.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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This is a refreshing poem comparing the newly engaged or married couple to spring. It's a good analogy, and you described spring so well, I see the cherry blossoms and peach blooms in my yard every year and they are so beautiful and refreshing to see. The hope is that the new couple will keep things fresh as long as they live. Thank you for sharing this.
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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So glad you dropped by to read and share your sentiments on my Cherry Blossom!