Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

So...Ricky lost a bunch'a weight, huh, Bill?
It can only serve to boost his self-esteem and ego, fer sure.
You seem to be enamored with lim'ricks today.
Well, we all appreciate a good laugh every now and then.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us once more.
~Dean

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thanks, Dean.

reply by Dean Kuch on 29-Nov-2018

Anytime, Bill.
U R welcome.

Comment from Chantae Harding

Good

I like the rhym scheme very interesting. I would maybe play around with puntuation. This is a very well done piece. Glad that I got the chance to read it.

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Suggestion on punctuation?

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

You're on a roll again, Bill! LOL, I take it Dim Dick was chubby and lost some weight so his friends now call him, Slim Rick! Oh, dear, Bill, this is really a chuckling one. And now I have to go and find a dictionary to learn what a laparoscopic limerick is! xx

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Laparoscopy refers to stomach surgery where parts of the upper intestines are removed to accelerate weight loss.

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 29-Nov-2018

Aha! I wonder if they will do it on our free National Health!! :))

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Another virtual six buddy. I wish I was as creative as you But I enjoy reading limericks, which are the best form of poetry bar none. Keep'em coming..

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

I have save some for Monday.