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Comment from nomi338
Okay now that is just weird. It's a good poem, creepy and exciting, but weird as heck as well. So now all of a sudden, you're into the macabre too. What will you do next, write a poem about Mary, Mary quite contrary? LOL. It would not surprise me in the least.
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Okay now that is just weird. It's a good poem, creepy and exciting, but weird as heck as well. So now all of a sudden, you're into the macabre too. What will you do next, write a poem about Mary, Mary quite contrary? LOL. It would not surprise me in the least.
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Thanks, nomi. Trying to touch all the bases.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You are a man of many talents, Bill! I enjoyed this poem, it's a catchy, rhythmic little poem. That picture does look rather scary though. I think I'd rather keep counting sheep! Well done again. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are a man of many talents, Bill! I enjoyed this poem, it's a catchy, rhythmic little poem. That picture does look rather scary though. I think I'd rather keep counting sheep! Well done again. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Sandra
Comment from Six-Star Writer
We are ourselves, but not ourselves. Alive, but also dead. Man changes from dark to light. From sun's set to moon's rise. This is th neverceasing duality of man.
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We are ourselves, but not ourselves. Alive, but also dead. Man changes from dark to light. From sun's set to moon's rise. This is th neverceasing duality of man.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
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Thanks, RW, for the review.
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You're welcome, BS.
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very interesting poem you have penned about werewolf counting sheep. I am so thankful I do not know dreams like that too. You used very good descriptive words and the imagery you chose went well with your words. love and blessings, Teri
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Bill, This is a very interesting poem you have penned about werewolf counting sheep. I am so thankful I do not know dreams like that too. You used very good descriptive words and the imagery you chose went well with your words. love and blessings, Teri
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Earl Corp
Pretty funny. Are we now on a supernatural poetry kick? This poem had it all. It rhymes, makes sense and it entertains me. I would remind you Halloween is over. Nice job.
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Pretty funny. Are we now on a supernatural poetry kick? This poem had it all. It rhymes, makes sense and it entertains me. I would remind you Halloween is over. Nice job.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
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Halloween?s over? Well, there?s still the midterms to scare us.