Love ~ For My Father
Short Poem - 5/7/7 - 3rd Place15 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Sweet three lined tribute to your dad. Nice flow and presentation as well. Fine alliteraiton of E and consonance of S and T--sounds good read aloud. Inspirational imprints!
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Sweet three lined tribute to your dad. Nice flow and presentation as well. Fine alliteraiton of E and consonance of S and T--sounds good read aloud. Inspirational imprints!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thank you RD for your thorough review on my short poem. As always, I am very grateful for your comments. ~DD
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:-)))
Comment from tfawcus
There are some people who leave an indelible impression when their lives cross ours and they continue to live on in memory long after they have gone.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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There are some people who leave an indelible impression when their lives cross ours and they continue to live on in memory long after they have gone.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thank you Tony for your thoughtful review on my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from SueZen
The love for your father beautifully expressed and reminds me of my father,
who has also passed over, but forever exists in my heart and soul too, a noble example for myself and humanity in general.
Thank you for sharing your love for your father.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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The love for your father beautifully expressed and reminds me of my father,
who has also passed over, but forever exists in my heart and soul too, a noble example for myself and humanity in general.
Thank you for sharing your love for your father.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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SueZen, thank you so much for taking the time to review my short poem. Your thoughtful words are very much appreciated. It will be 12 months this Boxing Day that my father passed towards heaven. I truly feel blessed to have had him as my father. He was the absolute best. ~DD
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And I thank you for delightful response to my review.
So only a year ago that your dear father passed over, into the light, but hope at a 'good old age' and without long suffering? Aren't we lucky and blessed indeed to have the fathers we had, the best ever! I talk to my father many times a day and truly believe his soul is with and watching over me and mine. Have a great day, Susan x
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece and it speaks of a universal truth, I think. On a metaphysical level and an emotional level for some.
nice job
GMG
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece and it speaks of a universal truth, I think. On a metaphysical level and an emotional level for some.
nice job
GMG
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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giraffmang, thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Kelly Hanna
A great poem of remembrance for a loved one. In this case your father. I loved the impact of the words. It was enough for a three line poem. You helped us feel a bit of acceptance along with a grief that always stays. Great job on this short poem!
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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A great poem of remembrance for a loved one. In this case your father. I loved the impact of the words. It was enough for a three line poem. You helped us feel a bit of acceptance along with a grief that always stays. Great job on this short poem!
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review my short poem Kelly. I appreciate your comments. ~DD