Comment from Galactia

Exceptional

Hi

That is smart and you composed a scientific fact which you have projected in just 19 syllables. Love educational poems.

Great job
Loved IT.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018

Thanks, I was so excited to learn that sound actually can travel through space - had to share that tidbit, and I loved the part about the old space dust! :))
Carol

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This three-line poem, Through Eons of Time, presented as a 5-7-7, finds that love never dies, but travels to a place where it is sorely needed. Nice.

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 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018

Thanks, Bill. It's so hard to do these short poems, to make it feel significant somehow. But when I learned about the old space dust, my path was clear :))
Carol