Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

Haha...that was a tough one, huh? Still came out well! Truth in a poem always looks good to me! Sometimes the truth or transparency means more than all the poetic words in the world! I like this poem!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018

When all else fails, tell the truth! Thanks so much, Tina -- much appreciated. Craig

reply by Tina Crute on 09-Oct-2018

:) May use that method
a time or two!

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I, for one, like the term "go-to-meeting" and have heard this before as in "go-to-meeting bonnet." I think it's akin to getting "gussied up," another term my English friend often used. Great job with this short poem and I enjoyed the dapper "go-to-meeting" outfit on the gentleman in the image. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018

Thanks very much, Marilyn :) Most grateful once again -- Craig

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Hi Craig!
I think you made it fit fine. I enjoyed your humorous take on making it work. Good flow and rhymes and presentation. No nits but one suggestion:

In thirty seconds(,) I was over it.

Warmly,
rd

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 Comment Written 09-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018

Haha, thanks, RD. I appreciate the great comments; also, I added the comma :)

Muchas gracias,
Craig

reply by rama devi on 09-Oct-2018

:-))